ArcticMonkey

Wow, crazy timing to write this

Hello! So returning to a point of my last review, I think I understand more now why Elena is leading Margaret to that room. I found this chapter a bit ...

Right... well then I'm kind of confused as to who is a human and who is a wolf haha

I am! And no problem

Yep yep, I gotcha xD. I was quite tired when I was reviewing this, sorry.

Sure, I'd love to hear it! Also, could you give me a link? Thanks.

Remember, you need to review in order to gain points, if you need tips on this let me know!

Well it's up to you, if you don't feel like working on this prologue you can always come back to it later :) If you're desperate to start writing on, ...

Aside from some typing errors, this is the start of some good improvements to your piece; good job!

There's definitely a good amount in the chapter as a whole, but like don't have all the dialogue in one place kinda, although reading it again it seems you've spaced ...

This is so great, and relevant. Love it

It's quite hard to say, yknow. is an article I found about it. To be honest, there haven't been enough character interactions to really see their gender. When they said ...

Wait, are you definitely saying it's the girl, now? If so, the voice is quite masculine. Anyways, that's a really cool idea! When I say add more descriptions, you don't ...

Oh right, I should've picked that up from the headlights line. Sorry about that ;-;

Hey again! I'm going to keep this as a comment for now, because I really can't think of what to put in a review. There are a few things I ...