Hi there Lima Bean! Nikayla here dropping in for a review on this Review Day.
Don't expect this review to be fully conscious for warning, I already forget parts of the first chapter--hopefully reading the rest of this will refresh my memory. Like how I almost forgot Kerani's name just now! Anyway, I enjoy how we pick up where we left off in the last part.
She undid the lock before I got to the door and I held it open for her. She returned to her sensual air. “You always are such a gentleman, Cat.”
So this is where Cat Steps comes from? I'm interested to see where the plot goes with the main character being forced to marry a husband while she's attached to Cat. Seems as if she's significant in the novel, though I'm pretty sure Kerani ending up with Cat after breaking off from her husband isn't the way that this is going to go. I also don't think that this will go in the direction of Kerani being in heartache because of not being able to see Cat anymore either. Perhaps though she still sees Cat after she's married? Maybe their relationship changes and we learn more about Cat?
I'm just speculating a bit of what might happen in the future with their relationship--I'm probably totally off though. Their interactions have been my favorite this far into the novel, but we'll see if somebody else can beat that. [Edit: As you know I now know that the hooker is indeed not Cat and instead Kerani is Cat so if you could substitute 'Cat' for 'Hooker' it'd be greatly appreciated.]
I can see that this chapter is a bit more lacking in the description department! Doesn't need too much because this novel is mostly focused on the dialogue for the first half of the chapter and the second half after a bit of transitioning is epic because of the fight scene. I'm not usually so mesmerized but I loved that about this chapter--I don't get to see that often and this turns out to be pretty dang sweet in that department.
My shoulder throbbed from the impact, legs still braced from the throw. Threads of shredded cotton landed on the equally shredded skin on my deltoid, making me wince. I reached up to feel my shirt in tatters for the whole joint, leather vest scratched and edges damp from blood. I’d skidded, hadn’t I. That, or landed off my armour before turning to take it on my back.
Judging from the bloody streak on the stone a few feet ahead of me, both was the best bet.
First of all, the second to last sentence in the first paragraph here should...probably be a question? Second of all, 'both was the best bet' in the single sentence that follows afterwards is awkward wording. I didn't want to go too in-depth about grammar this chapter because I want to talk more about the actual content. The end of the chapter is nice and sweet even. The characters and their interactions are easily the strongest and best parts even in the midst of battle.
I love how tight-knit the group feels already because it's warm and strong during a cool scene. Introducing these characters further by this means while also progressing the plot is cool though I found the Rat and that whole part to be confusing. The reader doesn't really know who the Rat is and then boom we're seeing a fight scene--I didn't like that aspect too much. That's easily the weakest part of this chapter, though other than that? Pretty solid.
If you have any questions, don't be afraid to ask! I hope I helped and have a great day.
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