ArcticMonkey

Hiya, Rosey! So, I just really love your writing style, it's really nice to read. I feel like the MC has a clear voice and opinions and it all just ...

Hi! This was a really cool read. I like the mystery behind it all, and even though there are quite a lot of unanswered questions at the end, it still ...

Hello! I'll jump straight in with what I liked. Now I remember I wanted to say this in the last chapter but I guess I forgot; I love how you're ...

Hiya Timmy and Deanie! So, firstly, umm, wow! I thought this was so so good. Ever read anything by Michael Grant? The writing style here totally reminds me of him, ...

Hiya Segreto! Here to review~ So I thought I'd break up this review into the different parts, then give you my overall impression. Prologue I really liked this prologue because ...

Hey Flite! I thought this was really cool to read, mainly because it was in the second person and you don't see this that often. Also, I think there was ...

'Ello! So last chapter I was like 'where are all the backstories' well here they are! This is a really good start to adding some more dimensions to your character, ...

Yo! What I liked about this chapter was that more was revealed about what life is like inside the prison, and another character is here. You always seem to put ...

Hi, again! The first thing I noticed is, you changed the POV, which is totally allowed I think, because the last part was a prologue. I was, however, a bit ...

Hiya Kanome! I saw this is in Adopt a Novel, so I thought I'd review x3 Well, firstly, this is quite short, so this review probably won't be that long ...

Hi guys! This was a cool collab, I think the idea is really cool that they've won something for a TV Show and now they get to go to Paris ...

Hello :) I'm going to jump straight in with what I liked, we were thrown right into the action with this story which is great. From the moment I started ...

Hi! What I liked about this was that you've got a really cool theme running through the whole song about light and darkness, which is something good to drive your ...

Hi Baesch! Here to review~ So this was a really weird read, mostly because I wasn't really expecting it, and I'm not the biggest fan of gory stuff. However, I ...

Hiya, Bisc. Here to review~ So, for a first poem, this is pretty good. I feel like you've already got quite a style going on here. I like how you ...