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  • Novel / Chapter » Romantic, Teen Fiction Re: Notice Me Lavvie

    Hiya Iggle Piggle! Here to review x3 Firstly, a few nitpicks: The words make Jared groan and he slammed his forehead into the door, causing a loud bang to ring ...

    Jun 30, 2013
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Steam.

    Hey jordin, here for a review! Well, I’m not really sure what to say about this as it’s rather short- of course that shouldn't really be a problem. I’m not ...

    Jun 30, 2013
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, General Re: Chasing Dragons: Chapter One

    Hey Stella! Here to review on this fine review day 8) I have to say, this was honestly a really good read! I really enjoyed it and I haven’t read ...

    Jun 30, 2013
  • Poetry » Narrative, Spiritual Re: Dead Love Letter

    Hey Wiz! I hath returned to review another one of your works ^^ Starting with the message of the poem, I thought that it was really kind of absorbing. It’s ...

    Jun 30, 2013
  • Lyrics » Romantic, Dramatic Re: 'Cause I Love You

    Hiya Katie! I will be reviewing your lyrics this fine review day :D Okay, so firstly I usually have this thing against love songs. I mean I know essentially basically ...

    Jun 30, 2013
  • Short Story » Realistic, Culture Re: The Wallet

    Hiya SoundofRain! Let’s get straight to the review: So what struck me about this on the first read is how informal it is. I’m not sure if informal is the ...

    Jun 30, 2013
  • Poetry » Romantic, General Re: Every Broken Piece

    Lylas! Here for a review on your song :D What I liked about this was that it had a pretty strong message. Although rather short, it was pretty effective. The ...

    Jun 30, 2013
  • Poetry » Horror, Realistic Re: Pregnant Satan

    Hey Wiz! Here to review :D Firstly, wow. Controversial much? :P Satan a girl and giving birth to Jesus? Now, I’m not going to argue with you about that, in ...

    Jun 30, 2013
  • Short Story » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: A Last Sight.

    Hiya Neth! Here for part 2 of your review requests. Firstly, nitpicks in the spoiler: Kyus gritted his teeth at the announcer's voice and jerking a spear off of the ...

    Jun 26, 2013
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Spiritual Re: Honour.

    Hey Neth! Here to review as requested (sorry for the delay!) What I liked about this poem was most of the language you used as I thought it contributed towards ...

    Jun 26, 2013
  • Poetry » Narrative, Lyrical Re: Mad Hatters

    Hiya, Deanie! I shall be your reviewer today. You'll have to bare with me a bit, because reviewing poetry isn't really my strong point, but I wanna improve xD My ...

    Jun 24, 2013
  • Short Story » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: The First Herb Girl

    Hiya herbgirl! Here to review :D Nitpicks in the spoiler: In FallenOake ther e is a tiny house with a thatched roof sitting next to an overgrown meadow filled with ...

    Jun 23, 2013
  • Novel / Chapter » Romantic, Dramatic Re: I Love You, Mr Dawson

    Hi Kirsty! Here to review :} So firstly, nitpicks in the spoiler: " I don’t care what it takes! Just get me him on the phone! No I will not ...

    Jun 23, 2013
  • Short Story » Romantic, General Re: This needs a title!

    Hiya TriSARAHtops! (cool name, by the way!) Here to review :) So firstly, nitpicks in the spoiler: It was raining when I first saw you. A sudden storm which appeared ...

    May 26, 2013
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: Worst of Both Worlds

    Hi there, Abid155! I shall be your reviewer today! My first impressions of this was that it was quite powerful and really sort of spoke the truth. Generally, I did ...

    May 26, 2013


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