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Re: Notice Me Lavvie
Hiya Iggle Piggle! Here to review x3 Firstly, a few nitpicks: The words make Jared groan and he slammed his forehead into the door, causing a loud bang to ring ...
Jun 30, 2013 -
Re: Steam.
Hey jordin, here for a review! Well, I’m not really sure what to say about this as it’s rather short- of course that shouldn't really be a problem. I’m not ...
Jun 30, 2013 -
Re: Chasing Dragons: Chapter One
Hey Stella! Here to review on this fine review day 8) I have to say, this was honestly a really good read! I really enjoyed it and I haven’t read ...
Jun 30, 2013 -
Re: Dead Love Letter
Hey Wiz! I hath returned to review another one of your works ^^ Starting with the message of the poem, I thought that it was really kind of absorbing. It’s ...
Jun 30, 2013 -
Re: 'Cause I Love You
Hiya Katie! I will be reviewing your lyrics this fine review day :D Okay, so firstly I usually have this thing against love songs. I mean I know essentially basically ...
Jun 30, 2013 -
Re: The Wallet
Hiya SoundofRain! Let’s get straight to the review: So what struck me about this on the first read is how informal it is. I’m not sure if informal is the ...
Jun 30, 2013 -
Re: Every Broken Piece
Lylas! Here for a review on your song :D What I liked about this was that it had a pretty strong message. Although rather short, it was pretty effective. The ...
Jun 30, 2013 -
Re: Pregnant Satan
Hey Wiz! Here to review :D Firstly, wow. Controversial much? :P Satan a girl and giving birth to Jesus? Now, I’m not going to argue with you about that, in ...
Jun 30, 2013 -
Re: A Last Sight.
Hiya Neth! Here for part 2 of your review requests. Firstly, nitpicks in the spoiler: Kyus gritted his teeth at the announcer's voice and jerking a spear off of the ...
Jun 26, 2013 -
Re: Honour.
Hey Neth! Here to review as requested (sorry for the delay!) What I liked about this poem was most of the language you used as I thought it contributed towards ...
Jun 26, 2013 -
Re: Mad Hatters
Hiya, Deanie! I shall be your reviewer today. You'll have to bare with me a bit, because reviewing poetry isn't really my strong point, but I wanna improve xD My ...
Jun 24, 2013 -
Re: The First Herb Girl
Hiya herbgirl! Here to review :D Nitpicks in the spoiler: In FallenOake ther e is a tiny house with a thatched roof sitting next to an overgrown meadow filled with ...
Jun 23, 2013 -
Re: I Love You, Mr Dawson
Hi Kirsty! Here to review :} So firstly, nitpicks in the spoiler: " I don’t care what it takes! Just get me him on the phone! No I will not ...
Jun 23, 2013 -
Re: This needs a title!
Hiya TriSARAHtops! (cool name, by the way!) Here to review :) So firstly, nitpicks in the spoiler: It was raining when I first saw you. A sudden storm which appeared ...
May 26, 2013 -
Re: Worst of Both Worlds
Hi there, Abid155! I shall be your reviewer today! My first impressions of this was that it was quite powerful and really sort of spoke the truth. Generally, I did ...
May 26, 2013
