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Re: The League Chapter 2
Hello Bellator and I'm Aquila ready for another kick-ass review! When I see science fiction, I am all in with expectations and attention. So that's why I think your work ...
Aug 21, 2013 -
Re: My Twin Blues
Hi Rayner! Aquila here for a poem review! Now I don't usually do poems but whatever. Your poem had me thinking and analyzing because it is quite abstract. It seems ...
Aug 20, 2013 -
Re: Operation Imperial ch-7
Hi Rishabh, Aquila here to review your work. I start out at chapter 7 so there might be a lot of detail and development that I missed out but I ...
Aug 19, 2013 -
Re: The Charm of Deception - Chapter Two, Part One
Hey Shadow! I'm back for more kick-ass reviews! Generally I felt that this was a very long chapter. In fact too long to sustain the readers attention especially when there ...
Aug 19, 2013 -
Re: A Single Black Rose (Chapter 4)
Hi there! Aquila here getting you a review as my mission to safe works in the green room! Okay though I am not a fan of romantic fiction, I have ...
Aug 15, 2013 -
Re: Rings of Rhea - Part 1.5
Hello! Aquila here on a mission to review like mad! I love science fiction and don't mind the occasional post-apocalyptic atmospheres. What you have written reminds me of 'Oblivion' directed ...
Aug 14, 2013 -
Re: The Survivors- Chapter Four
Hi Scribbles! Popping in for a review for the good of all stories! First of all I am impressed. I am hooked, I don't get obstructed by cheesy or over-description ...
Aug 13, 2013 -
Re: The Charm of Deception- Chapter Two, Part Two
Hi Mentor Shadow! Or Shady haha There's a common trend your stories take on and that is a consistent POV from the character of a young vulnerable girl. The good ...
Aug 13, 2013 -
Re: A History of Nuclear Genocide
Hey Pletta! This is an eye-opener. It's an interesting blend between science and our humanistic world. You have drawn a good parallel that is clear between the random and destructive ...
Aug 12, 2013 -
Re: Verse One
Hi Maxi! Honestly, it was quite good. I never had any problems with the flow or style you presented in this (I presume) first chapter. I can imagine and almost ...
Aug 12, 2013 -
Re: Star City - Prologue
Hey there I just could not help but read a fantasy story especially when it's short Haha! But what attracted met the most was the science fiction vibe I keep ...
Aug 10, 2013 -
Re: Unlocked Puzzle
It has been ages since I reviewed or studied poems, the last time I took it seriously was about 5 years ago! But pardon me for being rusty, I will ...
Aug 7, 2013 -
Re: The Aelfgar Wars, Pt 2
Hey Mela! As I had mentioned your story was interesting enough for me to pursue more in the first few parts. So here's a little perspective of mine which you ...
Aug 5, 2013 -
Re: Common Application College Essay
Hi Elinor, college applications are a pain in my country, like seriously they make you write and draw while you juggle the administration and paperwork. And of course the essay ...
Aug 4, 2013 -
Re: The Aelfgar Wars, Pt 3
Hello! It's time for some review'in! Alright first off I would like to mention how well you drew me into the story; I found myself returning to your story to ...
Aug 4, 2013
