Hi, there!
SlushySlapped here to review, as promised!
So, poetry really isn't my thing, but I'm going to give you the best feedback I can...
I really liked this! Especially this line.
Cruelty passing through with disregard of its damage, they have no choice but to let it pass.
I agree with this so much. You really put it beautifully. My favorite line was this:
You can't replace who you are. Or can you?
That was a powerful ending to a wonderful poem.
Again, I really liked this. Great job on this!
Keep writing!
(p.s. If I don't get to your short story before review day is over, I'll still review it after! )
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