Anwesha

Thanks, Amie! :-)

Thank you, Lily. I'm glad you enjoyed it. I'll definitely keep writing and improving. :-)

Not really. There are 6 lines in the end. This is meant to be a sonnet. 4-4-6 i.e a total of 14 lines. Thank you anyways. :-)

Thank you so much! :-)

Hey Sea, Your review is quite helpful, I must say. I know I messed up the punctuation at places. I'll be careful in future! Thanks. About the words, few things ...

It is meant to imply, the character will sustain the joy, the expectations and thrill of a 'first time' through out the journey, the new journey! Thank you for your ...

Thank you so much. I'm so glad you liked it, really! And I'll definitely try for the better next time. :-)

I liked that, Sunshine. :) It's something all of us wish at times. The repetition was worth it, in the end. I don't know how far this 'lower-case' idea's helpful. ...

I liked it. It was short and meaningful. But, the thing is, you could have added some more charm in it. It seems a bit too simple to me. Like, ...

Phew! That was blazing with anger. Nice intensity, I'll say. It was deep in its feelings and definitely very well written. Loved it!

This was amazing. A few grammatical errors like, 'then' in place of 'than' should be corrected. Otherwise, it was one of the best write-ups I've read till date. That someone ...

Something that brought tears to my eyes. It was very touching and sad. Keep up such great talent. Wonderful work!

Nicely written. Full of feelings and emotions. Quite touching.

yes, i know. i was too obsessed with the rhymes. so much that i missed out few expressions. i'll take care of it next time. thank you.