AntonioRivera

I read half of it, and honestly because I am tired haha! I'll read the rest tomorrow, but from what I did read, you have a nice voice here. It's ...

Jesus Christ. Listen, this isn't even a review. This story, or this piece is just amazing. I am a serious writer, so I appreciate great writing; and this is just ...

Hey, Antonio here, and I'll try my best to review this short piece. It seemed interesting, so I decided to read it. Overall, I think the piece is a little ...

Hey, Antonio here :) So I was drawn in by the title, and the fact that it's a prologue. When I read it, I felt, confused. Maybe after the story ...

Hey! So my review shall be short since the piece is short. I just want to say that the title brought me in, so that's always good. When I read ...

Hey! I'm here to review, so here you go. I'm going to speak chronologically as I read the items, starting with the title. In my opinion, the title is too ...

Hey! So first off, the title is very vague and drew me in through curiosity. It's a simple title that could mean anything really. After reading the poem, there isn't ...

It's simple and short, but very confusing and unclear. I don't really understand what it's about; poetry is supposed to be a bit confusing, but this is very scattered and ...

The poem has clever word play, but to me, it is a bit confusing. They say all great poems are meant to be misunderstood at first, but I can't seem ...

Seriously, this is outstanding. It is so simple, yet so powerful. I am glad that I came upon this, really. The rhyming brought me chills; I was able to sort ...

This is interesting I must say! I like the message and the mood is completely aggressive. I could imagine a guy with a bullhorn yelling to a crowd of people. ...

Let me begin by saying that I enjoy story titles that don't get revealed until the end of the story. It's written in large block format, and I must admit, ...

Short, concise, basic understanding, good message, swell connotative words, and rhyming scheme that makes the poem flow like water. Poems like this will never be the headstone of poetry sadly, ...

This was really to read. A few things though: 1.Your style is YOUR style, so this comment can be ignored if you want. But you used some of the same ...

Hello, I am going to share my thoughts on the poem. Well first off, I am terrible at writing poems that rhyme. I seem to lose meaning when I attempt ...