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Wow! Very descriptive and wonderfully written! You have obviously put some thought into this piece and I love the 'zombie' idea. The layout of the piece is a bit confusing ...

Great story, you really captured the essence of romance and It really was a sad story! Beautiful piece of work! Keep it up A blur. That was all that could ...

Very nice poem and very long. Each sentence was well constructed and the metaphors that you used we're exceptional! Keep it up :) What have we become? Disgusting beings of ...

Great piece of work. Really interesting to read and it really portrayed my emotions that I was feeling a that moment! Keep it up :) ? Disgusting beings of flesh ...

Not anymore. The humans came, supposedly created by God himself for the 'greater good'. Well just look at us now. We have riddled the world with the chains of mankind, ...

Hey very nice writing here. I love the suspense that you create throughout the whole story and it keeps building and building... The way you use your adjectives is very ...

Love the idea! Beautifully written, perfectly choosing the right words for each sentence. The end was a bit confusing but a solid poem :) at times the poem lacked a ...

Love the idea! Beautifully written, perfectly choosing the right words for each sentence. The end was a bit confusing but a solid poem :) at times the poem lacked a ...

Love the idea! Beautifully written, perfectly choosing the right words for each sentence. The end was a bit confusing but a solid poem :) at times the poem lacked a ...

Love the idea! Beautifully written, perfectly choosing the right words for each sentence. The end was a bit confusing but a solid poem :) at times the poem lacked a ...

Love the idea! Beautifully written, perfectly choosing the right words for each sentence. The end was a bit confusing but a solid poem :)

Very interesting read. Lots of descriptive passages that really portray the angst in the story. The narrative sentences got a bit repetitive, but overall a FANTASTIC story or chapter? The ...