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Re: Day Zero
Wow! Very descriptive and wonderfully written! You have obviously put some thought into this piece and I love the 'zombie' idea. The layout of the piece is a bit confusing ...
Oct 27, 2012 -
Re: The letter from a weeping angel
Great story, you really captured the essence of romance and It really was a sad story! Beautiful piece of work! Keep it up A blur. That was all that could ...
Oct 26, 2012 -
Re: The Jewels of Neora
Very nice poem and very long. Each sentence was well constructed and the metaphors that you used we're exceptional! Keep it up :) What have we become? Disgusting beings of ...
Oct 26, 2012 -
Re: How Do I Feel?
Great piece of work. Really interesting to read and it really portrayed my emotions that I was feeling a that moment! Keep it up :) ? Disgusting beings of flesh ...
Oct 26, 2012 -
Re: Weasels Below
Not anymore. The humans came, supposedly created by God himself for the 'greater good'. Well just look at us now. We have riddled the world with the chains of mankind, ...
Oct 26, 2012 -
Re: I was once a Scientist
Hey very nice writing here. I love the suspense that you create throughout the whole story and it keeps building and building... The way you use your adjectives is very ...
Oct 26, 2012 -
Re: My Smiles to The Reaper
Love the idea! Beautifully written, perfectly choosing the right words for each sentence. The end was a bit confusing but a solid poem :) at times the poem lacked a ...
Oct 26, 2012 -
Re: The Inside
Love the idea! Beautifully written, perfectly choosing the right words for each sentence. The end was a bit confusing but a solid poem :) at times the poem lacked a ...
Oct 26, 2012 -
Re: I Am The Killer
Love the idea! Beautifully written, perfectly choosing the right words for each sentence. The end was a bit confusing but a solid poem :) at times the poem lacked a ...
Oct 26, 2012 -
Re: Monster Hunter
Love the idea! Beautifully written, perfectly choosing the right words for each sentence. The end was a bit confusing but a solid poem :) at times the poem lacked a ...
Oct 26, 2012 -
Re: Monster Hunter
Love the idea! Beautifully written, perfectly choosing the right words for each sentence. The end was a bit confusing but a solid poem :)
Oct 26, 2012 -
Re: Let's buy a Death Permit!
Very interesting read. Lots of descriptive passages that really portray the angst in the story. The narrative sentences got a bit repetitive, but overall a FANTASTIC story or chapter? The ...
Oct 26, 2012