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  • Poetry » Literature, Realistic Re: Homo littera: Evolution of Words

    I actually like the title as is. This is a beautifully worded poem. I love the use of language you use as you talk about words and their history. It ...

    May 26, 2020
  • Article / Essay » General, Realistic Re: Look Up 2.0

    I enjoyed this very much and I love the message that's within it about how we shouldn't let our past define us. The comments I have about this more have ...

    May 25, 2020
  • Poetry » Fantasy, Other Re: Disney songs poem

    This is really good and I loved it! If you're into challenges with your writing, you should also try taking lyrics from different songs and combining them together to make ...

    May 25, 2020
  • Art » General, Literature Re: my paintbrush

    This was a really great poem! You did such a good job :) I think it's beautifully written so more of what I am going to comment on is just ...

    May 22, 2020
  • Short Story » Theatre, Humor Re: Elphaba

    I really liked this short story! I really like the POV you used. It's in first person, but the main character Elphie is addressing the reader directly and telling funny ...

    May 16, 2018
  • Poetry » Realistic, Humor Re: Uh Planet ain't a Planet!

    I really liked your poem! I liked the whole a planet ain't a planet theme and how, at least in my opinion, your poem explores how just because something doesn't ...

    May 16, 2018
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Click, Clack

    I really liked this poem. I just got done reviewing a heavy piece so this light poem about typing is a nice change of pace! I myself like typing a ...

    Apr 22, 2018
  • Other » Dramatic, Realistic Re: You Grow Up

    I don't think amazing can cover how I feel about this piece. I really loved it. The message is great and tells the truth about how painful it can be ...

    Apr 22, 2018
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Day Dreams

    I thought this was a good, short poem! It definitely conveys a lot of emotion through its simplicity. I liked the alliteration you had in the first line (heard hope), ...

    Feb 23, 2018
  • Poetry » Fantasy, Humor Re: The Truest Knight of Green

    I think for a second in the first line of the fourth stanza (The princess... in the end) I thought about Shrek, but I didn't even consider it to be ...

    Feb 21, 2018
  • Short Story » Fanfiction, General Re: Wildest Dreams.

    This is really good!!! I loved it!!It had a poetic aspect to it due to the lyrics and references you made to the songs. This is one of the most ...

    Feb 19, 2018
  • Short Story » Humor, General Re: A Story About A Story (No E's)

    This is amazing! I loved it. I just got back from reading another story in the No 'E' contest and it's nice to see another way of omitting e's from ...

    Feb 16, 2018
  • Short Story » General, General Re: Knny (No E's)

    I honestly thought this was going to be about a little kid learning some kind of life lesson, but then you kept throwing these twists at me and I loved ...

    Feb 16, 2018


Life is the art of drawing sufficient conclusions from insufficient premises.
— Samuel Butler