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Re: Homo littera: Evolution of Words
I actually like the title as is. This is a beautifully worded poem. I love the use of language you use as you talk about words and their history. It ...
May 26, 2020 -
Re: Look Up 2.0
I enjoyed this very much and I love the message that's within it about how we shouldn't let our past define us. The comments I have about this more have ...
May 25, 2020 -
Re: Disney songs poem
This is really good and I loved it! If you're into challenges with your writing, you should also try taking lyrics from different songs and combining them together to make ...
May 25, 2020 -
Re: my paintbrush
This was a really great poem! You did such a good job :) I think it's beautifully written so more of what I am going to comment on is just ...
May 22, 2020 -
Re: Elphaba
I really liked this short story! I really like the POV you used. It's in first person, but the main character Elphie is addressing the reader directly and telling funny ...
May 16, 2018 -
Re: Uh Planet ain't a Planet!
I really liked your poem! I liked the whole a planet ain't a planet theme and how, at least in my opinion, your poem explores how just because something doesn't ...
May 16, 2018 -
Re: Click, Clack
I really liked this poem. I just got done reviewing a heavy piece so this light poem about typing is a nice change of pace! I myself like typing a ...
Apr 22, 2018 -
Re: You Grow Up
I don't think amazing can cover how I feel about this piece. I really loved it. The message is great and tells the truth about how painful it can be ...
Apr 22, 2018 -
Re: Day Dreams
I thought this was a good, short poem! It definitely conveys a lot of emotion through its simplicity. I liked the alliteration you had in the first line (heard hope), ...
Feb 23, 2018 -
Re: The Truest Knight of Green
I think for a second in the first line of the fourth stanza (The princess... in the end) I thought about Shrek, but I didn't even consider it to be ...
Feb 21, 2018 -
Re: Wildest Dreams.
This is really good!!! I loved it!!It had a poetic aspect to it due to the lyrics and references you made to the songs. This is one of the most ...
Feb 19, 2018 -
Re: A Story About A Story (No E's)
This is amazing! I loved it. I just got back from reading another story in the No 'E' contest and it's nice to see another way of omitting e's from ...
Feb 16, 2018 -
Re: Knny (No E's)
I honestly thought this was going to be about a little kid learning some kind of life lesson, but then you kept throwing these twists at me and I loved ...
Feb 16, 2018
