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Anlon

Anlon

  • Poetry » General, General Re: Ireland-the home of my ancestors

    I'm Irish, actually Irish. This poem is nice, I like it. It's simplicity makes it look well, it's short and sweet. One thing I hate is poem that are too ...

    Mar 17, 2015
  • Short Story » Horror, Mystery / Suspense Re: Dr Carnival

    This is a very imaginative piece. I really enjoyed reading it. I think this would perform very well as an audio creepy pasta! Most of what is written is very ...

    Mar 13, 2015
  • Poetry » Action / Adventure, Fantasy Re: A tale in a letter.

    I like this, it's really imaginative and dramatic and your language gives the piece the effect it deserves. I definitely see the potential for a series or something with this ...

    Dec 24, 2014
  • Article / Essay » General, General Re: ???Failure is Learning Again and Again and Again???

    This is excellent. It's really inspiring, to be honest. The way you used your language to basically go to war with the concept of failure was amazing. Really well read, ...

    Dec 24, 2014
  • Lyrics » Culture, Lyrical Re: Egypt

    This is interesting. In my band, there are two main lyricists; me and the lead singer. He has a very cryptic style of writing, similar to yourself and it's really ...

    Dec 24, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Dramatic, Supernatural Re: Diary Of A Dead Girl (Edited)

    Glorifying death is not something that I'm particularly impressed by, but I did enjoy the language you used in this piece. It was colourful and somewhat descriptive, but not descriptive ...

    Dec 24, 2014
  • Poetry » Satire, General Re: Look, I can be a Poet

    This is absolutely brilliant! I've only recently grown fond of poetry, before then I had a massive distaste for it and I just got the vibe that poet's were pretentious. ...

    Dec 24, 2014
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Health Re: Music Mind

    I'm a musician, I love music, it's my passion along with writing, but all this did was confuse the shit out of me. I get that a lot of poetry's ...

    Dec 24, 2014
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Other Re: A Letter to Insecurity

    First thing I need to say is; I got the chills reading the last stanza. I've always thought that art was about interpretation, so obviously, the meaning I take from ...

    Dec 24, 2014
  • Poetry » General, Spiritual Re: Loneliness

    This definitely features talent. Each line flows well and it's easily read, which is a nice change of pace from most pieces like this that I've read. The emotion is ...

    Dec 24, 2014


Some people are hourglass shaped, some people are apple shaped, some people are pear shaped, some people are even bean pole shaped, but if we’re not careful we all become banana shaped. This is your gentle posture reminder.
— Ranger