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Re: Ireland-the home of my ancestors
I'm Irish, actually Irish. This poem is nice, I like it. It's simplicity makes it look well, it's short and sweet. One thing I hate is poem that are too ...
Mar 17, 2015 -
Re: Dr Carnival
This is a very imaginative piece. I really enjoyed reading it. I think this would perform very well as an audio creepy pasta! Most of what is written is very ...
Mar 13, 2015 -
Re: A tale in a letter.
I like this, it's really imaginative and dramatic and your language gives the piece the effect it deserves. I definitely see the potential for a series or something with this ...
Dec 24, 2014 -
Re: ???Failure is Learning Again and Again and Again???
This is excellent. It's really inspiring, to be honest. The way you used your language to basically go to war with the concept of failure was amazing. Really well read, ...
Dec 24, 2014 -
Re: Egypt
This is interesting. In my band, there are two main lyricists; me and the lead singer. He has a very cryptic style of writing, similar to yourself and it's really ...
Dec 24, 2014 -
Re: Diary Of A Dead Girl (Edited)
Glorifying death is not something that I'm particularly impressed by, but I did enjoy the language you used in this piece. It was colourful and somewhat descriptive, but not descriptive ...
Dec 24, 2014 -
Re: Look, I can be a Poet
This is absolutely brilliant! I've only recently grown fond of poetry, before then I had a massive distaste for it and I just got the vibe that poet's were pretentious. ...
Dec 24, 2014 -
Re: Music Mind
I'm a musician, I love music, it's my passion along with writing, but all this did was confuse the shit out of me. I get that a lot of poetry's ...
Dec 24, 2014 -
Re: A Letter to Insecurity
First thing I need to say is; I got the chills reading the last stanza. I've always thought that art was about interpretation, so obviously, the meaning I take from ...
Dec 24, 2014 -
Re: Loneliness
This definitely features talent. Each line flows well and it's easily read, which is a nice change of pace from most pieces like this that I've read. The emotion is ...
Dec 24, 2014
