AngerManagement

Hey Dragons, I hit the ground running, turned a corner and bolted right into the scaly paw of an enormous animal. I tried to run in the other direction but ...

I was never one to believe in suicide. I always truly believed it was selfish, really I did. I was right too. It is selfish. It manipulates your mind against ...

Hey Retro, Let me chase my ghosts. Don't try to hold me back. Let my memories haunt me ,-->should be a comma and try to hold me back. Let the ...

Hey Moose, I like your imagery and description, I could picture the sun rising And the surrounding areas response to it. The only thing that bugs me is that we ...

Hey Razzle. Please tell me I’m not alone, On my own, in this strange A bit confusing because I thought when people where alone they were generally on their own. ...

Hey Tori, I loved the idea and i know how hard it must have been to think of things that made sense to the style you were going for. Although ...

Its a bit confusing. I thought that they never really got to know each other? Why would he walk in and kiss her? It seems a bit realistic but it ...

Hey Ofir. I like the beginning of the story. The reader is informed of how nervous the MC is to be doing whatever she's doing. After that I kind of ...

Hey *waves* October’s Monday, morning, a grey drizzle clad the grey town, and the smell of shone-shine This was going great until the bit about Shone-shine. I was like huh? ...

This was really good. The imagery was great, the storyline was amazing and the conflict just made me keep going. There were little to no grammar mistakes but a few ...

Hey Emilie, I really tried to read this and I got to read some bits that I consider good but it was hard to read anything. Everything is in one ...

Hey Kaywiia, Saying that I liked this would be a huge understatement. I loved it, the description, the flow, the characters voice all complemented this and made it an amazing ...

Hi C *waves* The bodies of fallen surrounded me with eyes frosted open, fixated on me. The bodies of fallen what, I think a word is missing here. Steam still ...

Hi *waves* This was quite different. I liked the dialogue and I liked the transition from being in the car to being at the funeral. With every thump of my ...

Hey Live, This was really cool and I think it's sort of original Almost like your brain is a TV and your remote batteries are broken, there’s no buttons on ...