Angels-Symphony

Hey Master ^^ Shina here for a review ;) I. Nitpicks Can't you see her tears? The ones she's been shedding for years. I believe there should be a question ...

Hey Leslie ^^ Shina here for a revieww ;) Your smile fades into a frown Her eyes are turned down Lifes all going wrong tonight The second line needs another ...

Hey Gal ^^ How's my favorite ten year-old YWSer :P I'm here as requested... and a bit late. I'm not sure what I can do for you since Kylan's already ...

Hey Searria ^^ Shina here as requested. I wrapped my thin jacket tightly around me in a pathetic attempt to protect myself from the relentlessly biting cold. Oh dear O_o ...

Zahara glanced down at the tops of the redwood trees from her perch on a tree limb. She looked across the sea of green towards the mountains. This doesn't make ...

Dear Parental Figures, [s]And[/s] why do I cry, This doesn't need "and" because there's no other idea before it. Every time I try *and picture[s]s[/s] your faces? It would be ...

My world is shattered. My life is broken. My heart is filled, This is really tell-y, dogs. You know the difference, I've seen you review. with you desires and lies. ...

……And so they said to this little boy of eight, If he went on dreaming doom would be his fate. And ellipses is only 3 periods, and I don't think ...

You scream with pleasure, “Oh, what a treat it is To catch the perfect.” This doesn't make so much sense. I understand what you're trying to say, but you need ...

Hey Zanna ^^ Here as requested. The rough autumn wind blew through the room, ruffling the curtains in front of the open window, and teasingly played with the slumbering girl’s ...

Hey Winter ^^ Shina here for a review ;) No one can see me For who I really am In the dark is where I be Hidden by the judging, ...

Hey Nixie ^^ Shina here for a review ;) The tree with his timeless grace of swaying leaves and limbs, calls up the songs of heaven when he rustles with ...

Asians usually stare at each other people because they're very critical xD For example, my family in the Philippines. If someone were to come back after a few years to ...

Hey Shakira ^^ Shina here for a review ;) Dinner on table, children quiet Maybe adding "the" after "on" Beautiful, rare smile upon his face The flow would work better ...

Hey Dreambeliever ^^ Shina here for a review ;) Music creates an inner delightment, An engraved impression on our hearts, Semi-colon, not a comma. -------------- Dream, I understand what you're ...