Angelorchid

The poem is very soft and graceful. It shows that the moment which inspired you to write this is a lovely one. You have a few spelling issues and the ...

Firstly, I'll say you did a good work with imagery. The story works well as a short story but I'd suggest you to add more details about the girl. Her ...

Hey Alliyah, This was not a cliche poem and that's what I liked best about it. The sadness, questions and doubts following a break up has been perfectly portrayed. You ...

Hey starlinks! The first poem "What is love?" is very adorable. The words create this vision of a happy couple satisfied in their little world. It's very sweet and dream ...

I am totally in love with this poem! You have a way with words that tangles the reader in the beautiful web you are weaving. The poem as a whole ...

This was a very engrossing story. You knew your character really well and that made it easier for the readers to get to know her as well. The way you ...

Hey! Wow! I absolutely loved this story. I didn't even realize when it ended. I was totally engrossed by it. The sadness of the girl and the incident with the ...

Hey bluewaterlily! Realistic,beautiful,enchanting,mesmerizing,fabulous! I am not good with reviews so I'll just say I loved this poem, especially the last para. Beautifully stated a bitter truth. Look

Hey :) This was a goodread. Short but still managed to portray a lot of emotions. I have read a lot of love stories and this is definitely a good ...

Hey, Welcome to YWS. Now, off to your story, it was truly very good. Yes, there are bits and pieces which could use some work but otherwise well done. I ...

Hey. Here to review. This was a very touching piece of writing. It conveys a message of how one carelessness can ruin so many lives. There's only one little thing, ...

Hey, This was just amazing. Truly fabulous. The way the author chose to apologize instead of pretense is great! The words, the symbolism, the emotions, evrything was spot-on! And the ...

Hello, Angel here,I am here to review. I like the way you wrote the story in sentences, it added to the drama. But you might want to add a few ...

Hey, I am here to review your story. So first off : Even though I like your idea of portraying as having a cup of tea blissful, I didn't like ...

Hey, I like the title of your story and and the connection to the story with it. But the story itself is has some problems. Firstly, you should have divided ...