AngelKnight900

I've been reading your novel for the past last chapters and I am hooked! I really enjoy fantasy novels, especially writing one because you can create anything without the need ...

oh....I was actually expecting something very big. Well the title is good :D But no...I think you could have gone all out with this. I would have written a lot ...

Okay...I was going to be serious here until I saw Anchor's avatar. Awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww *cough, cough* Ok...I'm going to be serious. I kind of like this chapter. The only thing I ...

I think that most authors or producers or just artists just have this thing when their first work is the best and as they go on, their work just kind ...

Wow this was really good and I'm very impressed by your writing skill. What I most like about your writing is that you're able to grasp some emotion from your ...

This story is going great but there's only one negative thing that I don't like about this chapter thought. With a great beginning comes a great end, right and there ...

Hello there. I admire what you got here and I'm very quite impressed. Yet again, I'm a little confused. I can see that her nanna is dying and stuff but ...

Hmmm.....well I know you have explained everything but it may have to work a little bit more. He is three years old and an angel but yet again, he's three ...

Well everyone already said everything -__- Great :/ but this was graphic. Wow and I'm a little dissapointed at myself because I can't say much. What I will note on ...

You can't have a friend's sloppy seconds but what if they weren't so sloppy? That's what I was thinking when I read this. This story is very interesting and I ...

I don't really go by that rule. 'you can't date your friend's ex' but you can't control your feelings but back to your story. They say you can't have ur ...

This is good but what I will disagree about is the argument present here. Sure arguments come in varieties, but in school, I don't think people will present such an ...

Hello there :D I really like this chapter but what I will comment on is that it seems to be more of a prologue than a chapter because of your ...

To start off, welcome to YWS!!!! :D Now, YWS is a wonderful community and whatnot but one thing that I will warn you about is that there are some HARSH ...

OK. Your past reviewers already said everything. -__- So all I can say is that this was two words. AWE & SOME. I'm already very interested in your writing and ...