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Re: Me Myself and I
It had no rhythm, but i liked it anyway. :)
Dec 12, 2005 -
Re: he plays with fire
Wonderful imagery The DOWN bit was really clever and unique. nice work
Dec 10, 2005 -
Re: I'm the Guy
i loved it. If you make the changes the others suggested then the poem will run smoother. :D
Dec 3, 2005 -
Re: Best Friends?
I liked it. It had a basic rhythm to it :D
Dec 3, 2005 -
Re: -untitled-
I don't think its dramatic but i really liked it. I think it fits Lyrical poetry more. But Good work. :D
Dec 1, 2005 -
Re: disconnected
It was like a converstion or a story. I liked it alot. :thumb:
Dec 1, 2005 -
Re: Snow...(flakes)
Three words, Short, Sweet and Simple . Nice work! :)
Dec 1, 2005 -
Re: Angels
It was a simple poem. It was okay but maybe you could create some imagery. :D Welcome to YWS, hope you like the site.
Dec 1, 2005 -
Re: Make Believe
I love it. I can completely relate to it. It was beautiful. Wonderful work! :D
Nov 30, 2005 -
Re: Freedom's Price
Excellent. A beautiful piece of writing :D
Nov 30, 2005 -
Re: Teach Me (first ever piece of poetry!)
I loved your ending the most!!! Good poem :D
Nov 29, 2005 -
Re: Lost?
A memorable poem. It was good
Nov 29, 2005 -
Re: Broken Dreams
This was great. I really liked it.
Nov 29, 2005 -
Re: written while all sad on the bus
This poem was okay. It needs more imagery :D
Nov 29, 2005 -
Re: Robin Hood
I liked the poem, it had a lot of imagery and was like a story. But the rhyming was a little strange. :D
Nov 29, 2005