Andie

I can respect your views about America's past. Every country has a sordid past, no one can name one country that doesn't have blood staining their soil. But I think ...

I thought it was great, you could also count it in with narrative poetry if you wanted too. I loved you personification of the storm and all of the imagery. ...

The new and towering boy in outpatient folds the lavish scaffold of himself into a smallish chair as though (good diction) it were an ongoing task to account for all ...

I liked it, but I feel like you could lend more emotion and passion to it. It was good, I just feel like you had some strong emotions when you ...

Trust. A funny Five letter word (nice beginning) You blew mine away Like dust My world has Been held by many But by you (a little awkward) is when it ...

I liked that you personified memory. Cool idea. I do have to comment on your rhyming though. You only rhymed at the very end so it made me stop and ...

I liked the emotion in it, but the part where he said "Into a land you may not, come back to my arms." sounded strange even though I understand what ...

Pretty much every comment I have about grammer has been said, but I just wanted to say that I think you did a great job with this poem. I could ...

I really liked it and the ideas that you had about following our dreams and being alone. I did have one question as I read it. You say that "we ...

I agree with ty, I loved the poem overall and it was really easy to relate to, but the ending didn't blend. I think it's because of the "I am ...

I really liked this because it sounded real, not like you spent a long time thinking about diction or imagery. I especially like the part where you say love isn't ...

Well, first off you should know that I love this poem, it was very powerful. It had great imagery and emotion! Good job, especially for your first time posting. This ...

It was really cute, except this part didn't rhyme Do I have a life? I think I do. I think I’d better find it soon. So the flow got a ...

I like how unsympathetic the narrator is and how you get to the point. There's no fluff or pomp in this poem, which is a nice change. Very real and ...

I really liked it, the idea of this girl only liking herself when she's writing was good. When my heart begins to beat Or, so it seems Was it not ...