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Hi! I really, really liked this chapter. And would you tag me in the story, ever so kindly? I check the green room every day, but just in case... So. ...

Hi! Me again, reviewing this lovely story. So many questions were answered here! And so many more! So, Minea is in 'love' (I'll get to this later) with Jay...and about ...

Hi! Again! Okay, I was a little confused, still am, but some things have cleared up. The man in the beginning is the poor soul who's been pinned by that ...

Hi! This is really intriguing! I love how you opened with the girls sitting in the woman's cottage. I was wondering what they were doing there since it didn't seem ...

Hiii You may disregard my asking for the name of the MC in 1.2, Ashton it is! (I think that name suits him perfectly) His name was spoken in dialog ...

Hiii! This is amazing! I love the way you wrote this, it feels almost like wandering down a maze. It's strange the way he sees things as materials to be ...

Hiii! To answer the question at the top, yes. This is quite good. It read very smoothly, though I did notice a few spots, mostly with descriptions but nothing too ...

Helllo, I really like the way this poem is broken up chronologically, and the imagery is amazing! I think the topic is something easily relatable, I myself had a wee ...

Helllo! This is a very powerful poem. I love the short stanzas, most of my poetry comes out the same way, and I think its very clear, but at the ...

Helllllo, This is very twisty. Good twisty. I like how you unfolded the idea, bringing in new elements and stringing it along. But since this is poetry, I would break ...

Hellllo. This. Is. Amazing. I love the format. You need to tell me how you did that. And I love the words, how they weave together (he he). I could ...

Helllllo, This is great! I like how you showed the people and their thoughts, without being flat out obvious, or worse yet, cheesy, about their struggles. I felt like all ...

Helllllo, I love the fun house feel of this. Is he in a fairy tale? In his bed room? WHO KNOWS. And I like that wonderful trippiness so much. I ...

Helllllo! This is amazing! I like how you put so much emotion in it, and I can tell you took a long time writing it. All the strands of sentences ...

Helllllo, This is great! There was so much description, I could see the cul-de-sac and could picture a girl on a bike, long hair in the wind. The beginning made ...