Salutations, Alliyah!
Rinisha is back here and ready to review š!
Buckle up, 'cause this is going to be a bumpy ride. Iām going to keep it short alright!āØ
All in all
This party rocked, let's take a quick look!
I think this is probably the first time I have left you a review on one of your poems, Chicken Queen. The pleasure is all mine, I decided that this poem of yours needed my attention. I should mention that you have a lot of talent. I read some of your poems before I came across this one. Great work so far!
Fancy title you got there. That was the first thing that made me curious as to what this was all about, to be honest I would never have made the connection between the spiders and the spiral. Great choice of words, along with your lovely swirl in the middle. I love how the ending is not abrupt and slowly dances out of there while returning to its original form.
I have never seen such a creative poem in my life so this was very nice and definitely made my day. Your rawness in the poem is real and I think it is cute too. I can get so lost in your spiral with your poem. I wonder where you got the inspiration from. Anyway, you are a great poet.
You could work on:āļø
In my opinion, you should definitely consider capitalising your title, as it makes it more confident as a title. I have no more criticism. I have to be honest with you, I'm not really a poetry reviewer, so this one's going to be short.
Have a nice day or night further! Keep writing! You are amazing!
Amazingly yours,
Rinisha ā Be yourself and keep writing! šš
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