Anamel

Thank you, I actually think this is the lowest quality of all the poems I%u2019ve written lol

Thank you, I was thinking of adding a few more lines of detail to make it a more solid piece so I appreciate your review

Wow! I've never seen someone be so thorough and helpful in a review before. Don't worry about it being too 'harsh', because it wasn't. What you've said can even be ...

Thank you! Your review is quite helpful.

dude stop spamming this

why are you spamming this on everyone's submissions, you shouldn't be counting this as a review b/c you're obviously just trying to get points and don't care and don't read ...

yes, that's ok :) And I agree, sometimes it hurts to receive criticism and I've experienced it before but when people barely even read what you wrote and just praise ...

Also, here is a helpful article about show not tell:

I think you should, you just have to believe in your story, commit to it, and have your heart in it. Try planning out the future in the far distance, ...

I think you'd really enjoy watching the show American Gods. It has the same premise and it's amazing.

thx! Nana is one of my favorite mangas

np. this book pdf thing helps a lot with writing too i suggest checking it out it's awesome

why not?

Np I completely understand, but in every review on this website usually we have to say some sort of criticism to attempt to be helpful but def not my intention ...

haha well it's certainly served you right