AmyMedek

Aww.. this is such a cute story. I especially like when John and Sofie finally got together at the end. So adorable! Anyways... I thought that the bold letters was ...

This is one funny story. I really liked it. Especially when the lion could easily spot the zebra and said something like, "I can see your white fur amongst the ...

Nice way to start the story. I like the differing comparisons between being a domestic wife and being an adventurer. As for descriptions, I give you a thumbs up. Swollen ...

I found this one to be pretty entertaining. Especially since it sounded kinda like pirates or something. Kinda reminded me of the Peter Pan universe on Captain Hook's pirate ship. ...

Wow, great mix of dialogue and interaction! I think that both Annabeth and James came across very clearly. Even though it was a bit lengthy, I think you can get ...

This is a good beginning, but I would've liked it more if the story was less vague. There are two ways that I can think of off of the top ...

I found the boots to be a nice comparison with struggling with life. If that was the point you tried to get across, then good job. As for the girl, ...

I love the metaphors. Especially when you described making tea. It wasn't just tea. It was a process that both flavored and destroyed the water from what it once was. ...

It has a nice flow to it, especially since it goes by so quickly with dialogue in mind. I would've liked to see some more interactions though rather than having ...

I found the dialogue to be a bit hard to follow, but I got the gist of it. I think it's just because I'm not used to seeing t' instead ...

This one sounds very engaging. Especially since you had the dialogue and reactions flow so well together. Plus, you didn't give away anything, which leaves the audience to guess what ...

I'm guessing that the king has some sort of power to steal another's youth. I liked how you used the descriptions to show what he was doing rather than outright ...

Wow. I like the description "a reverse firework show." I found that to be pretty unique. Plus I think it'd grab more peoples' attention since it doesn't sound cliche to ...

This was quite interesting. It reminds me a bit of Adventure Time or Candyland. As for him being the last human... I'd like to know more about how that happened, ...