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Re: Family
Hi, Memory here to review this beautiful piece of writing you have shared with us. One thing I noticed about this piece is that it has a lot of emotion ...
Apr 7, 2015 -
Re: idk first poem---not very good
Hi there Memory here for a review
Mar 11, 2015 -
Re: Immortal Devotion
Hi ForgottenMemories here to review. After three days continues snowfall Continues should be Continuous A simple typo and I'm sure you already noticed it. the sun finally said hi to ...
Feb 22, 2015 -
Re: Chapter 7: The Tale
Hi my name is Mem and i'm here to review Who the devil are you and what do you think you’re doing with my wife?! I just wanted to say ...
Jan 25, 2015 -
Re: Depression
Hi my name is Memory and I will be reviewing your poem this fine evening! :) I'd like to say that the way that you had the depression talk about ...
Jan 25, 2015 -
Re: Black Bands: Chapter 1 - Why are we here?
Hey Memory here for a review! Your first sentence is very nice. :) My head is pounding, my vision is blurry. Just add the word "and" after the comma and ...
Jan 25, 2015 -
Re: The Old Abandoned Home Beside the Corner Store
Hi there and Happy Review Day. My name is Memory. I would like to start off by saying that I love the emotion and the picture your words painted in ...
Jan 25, 2015 -
Re: The Perfect Baby Doll Chapter 1
Hey It's ForgottenMemories here for review day. Im just going to jump in. She was pregnant, no doubt about it. You need and should probably be more descriptive here. Honestly ...
Jan 25, 2015 -
Re: Goodbye
Hi my name is Mem and I'm here to review on this wonderful day :) Wow, This poem is beauiful. I love the emotion you put into it. I do ...
Jan 25, 2015 -
Re: Dual Identity - Prologue
Hey hon, Mem here to review
Jan 25, 2015 -
Re: My Wonderland-Part 1
Hey ForgottenMemories here to review again. Im not going to sugaroat this because you honestly need the critics. First off, This right here has so many grammatical errors and I ...
Jan 23, 2015 -
Re: Airport Notebook
Hey it's Memory here to Review! First off this is a run on sentence. Here is a link if you need help knowing what a run on sentence is When ...
Jan 23, 2015 -
Re: The Perfect Baby Doll Chapter 1
This is a great beginning to a story. I would like more of a description of Corinne. I think the best part was when she felt that instant bond but ...
Jan 11, 2015 -
Re: The Musing of Words
This is truley a beautiful Poem. it's beautifully written. I see nothing really wrong with this Poem as far as grammar and punctuation go. Your spelling is great. The part ...
Jan 1, 2015 -
Re: zayn's vampire girlfriend
im not going to be rude but in all honesty this is Cliche as all heck and putting it into a paragraph was a bad idea. to me this makes ...
Dec 3, 2014