Amie

I really like this poem; well done! I like the repitition as this helps to create a flow. I find that this piece really helps to grasp an insight of ...

A very well written poem! i like the consistency and flow of this piece, i think that there are minor tweaks you could do to sway any confusions with wording ...

this is such a gripping poem, and conveys those strong feelings [hidden] oppressed... i love the sense of breathlessness/urgency in the first stanza- which emphasised your pain; i love this, ...

this is quite an interesting poem; short and precise! i love how the fact that becuase it is sort, it emphasises on their 'temporary' days- which in fact, leaves ominous ...

What a wonderful poem! i love how this sways away from the typical romance poems where they own eachother- this is modern and written with a real and vivid edge; ...

How i enjoyed reading this piece! I love the use of imagery that you have contrived throughout; this piece is emotional and quite disturbing- i love it! i fell that ...

I absolutely love this poem, the first two lines literally drew me in! I think that this is captivating, every word leaves me wanting more! and the use of image ...

This poem is so cute; short and sweet! I love the use of imagery- including typical thinga that you would associate with relationships/romances. With the use of 'my old willow ...