AmeliaCogin

Hiya Jazzy; I'm here as requested! Okay, so onto a review... My overall first-impresssion: I enjoyed reading this. It was reasonably well-written; your prose was steady and controlled. I do ...

Hiya! I'm here, at last, for a review! I wanted to review this so badly because I'm quite familiar with the myth of the nymph Calypso. I love history, especially ...

Hiya Bell! I can call you that, right? Because it's quite cute! Anyway, onto a review! This piece was really, really good. The opening few sentences were a little obscure, ...

Hi Twit; it's so nice to be able to review something of yours! I'm not sure if we've "met" before now so, Hello, I'm Amelia. Do you have a name, ...

Hello, Hayden! Finally, I get to a review! Ok, so let's get started... Hayden, you don't need me to tell you that you're a brilliant writer: for heck's sake - ...

Hiya Lumi! All I have to say is just wow! I really loved your story; I guess Joshua's competetion got us all into flashfiction! I'd normally start with critiques and ...

Hiya - I'm here as requested! Okay, so, this was...alright. I know you asked for the 'thous' and 'arts' not to be critiqued, but I have to say that I'm ...

Hi! Have you got a first name? ( obviously ) I'm Amelia - nice to meet you! * shakes hands *! I don't think I've ever reviewed a piece of ...

Hello! Onto a review...It's my first in a while! Ok, so, my overall first impression...This was dull. Bland, uninspiring, and dull. I don't mean to sound too harsh, but I ...

Hiya, Mac; I'm here as promised! Let's get to down to a review, eh? Okay, so, this was good. You've posted a well-written, well-presented chapter which builds intruige and leads ...

Hiya! After reading both passages, I thought I'd better review the second. It was really good. Like a few of the other reviewers pointed out, It was very speech-based, and ...

Hello. I didn't enjoy really enjoy reading this, sad to say. Why? Because it was unrelatable. I could not relate emotionally or psychologically with you MC, for her feelings are ...

Hello, Mac! I'm here as promised! Right, let's get down to a review, shall we? Okay...so, where to start... Overall-first impression I enjoyed this first chapter, Mac. I'm definately up ...

Hiya Lele! How's it going? I really enjoyed your poem. It's full of raw emotion. Your statements are very stark and blunt, and you put your point across very forcefully ...

Hiya Hayden! I'm here as promised! There is absolutely no questioning the fact that you have a gift for writing - your prose is incredibly sharp, attuned, and focused. You ...