AlyssaB506

Wow! This is amazing! Listening to this poem allows people to connect to your thoughts and illustrates a clear and vivid message for your readers. To help go over this ...

Hey! I have to say, I enjoyed your poem. Just to make things a little easier on you, I have written a kind of a pros and cons list of ...

Your poems are very detailed and thorough. I love how each one has its own story behind it. Also, the vocabulary that was incorporated seems to be quite fitting for ...

Hi! I loved your poem! Well Done: I must say, I love the concept of your poem. Honestly, I have to agree with TheKomodoDragon, "beggers crawling at their feet", was ...

WOW! That was... Interesting. I love the way you worded your poem, and rhymed! (Rhyming poems are my favorite) Although, I wonder what your inspiration for this was. As descriptive ...

I love the wording and concept of your poem. Yo used some more challenging words that I felt gave a certain maturity and understanding throughout you poem The only constructive ...

This poem is amazing. I agree with everyone else. This is a suspenseful poem. I believe referencing a difficult time in this person's life to a cell, is very creative. ...

I have to agree with everyone else, I am also a little lost. You should not worry about that to much. There are just a few minor errors too fix. ...

I like the mystery of the person you are describing. This sounds like a riddle. Your writing is very intriguing. The one line that sounded a little weird to me, ...

This poem is very intriguing to readers. Since you added descriptive details, your readers are given the opportunity to visualize your poem. I hope you continue to write like this. ...

Your writing is phenomenal. I did see a couple spelling and grammar errors every once and a while, but I believe you have an amazing talent. From my personal opinion, ...

It seems like you put deep thought and emotion into your writing, but you could be more descriptive. I suggest adding adjectives, that way your readers can visualize what is ...

This example of writing is amazing. You are extremely descriptive, and I believe the use of similes in this writing added a longer lasting affect. Even though your writing is ...

I must say, this is amazing. You capture your readers by the amazing descriptions, allowing your readers to visualize what you have said. In addition, repeating words gave the poem ...