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Re: Just Married
Hi Antonio. Story was really good especially ending was perfect.. First of all, it’s a well-written and engaging piece. I genuinely hope the next parts are released soon—I can’t wait ...
May 31, 2025 -
Re: Emotions?
Hi Fennevolent..first I must say your name is very unique and you did good job with the poem. The title perfectly reflects the essence of the poem and gives a ...
May 31, 2025 -
Re: The Definition
Hey..Taosted writer, Always here..hope ur doing good and safe. I always feel like I'm not good enough to review anyone's work because everyone on YWS is so talented. That's why ...
Apr 9, 2025 -
Re: they would never understand
Heyy....hope your doing good. It's alwaysea here, loved the title and the poem is amazing, and my favorite part is the first line—"They ask how you are, and you just ...
Mar 16, 2025 -
Re: My Dad Was Absent
Hey how are you..hope your doing good. The title caught my eye because it was catchy. Although the title talks about the absence of parents, the story itself is well-written. ...
Mar 12, 2025 -
Re: A Fool's Gamble
Heyy...Rooke, hope you're having a great day. I am writing my thoughts here, hope it helps though I am not a experienced writer Okayyy...coming to the story, When I first ...
Jan 29, 2025 -
Re: My crime, my problem to be angry
Heyy...have a great day. I don't feel qualified to write a review, as you're writing shows great skills and experience. I am still taking baby steps. Here we go, Story ...
Jan 24, 2025 -
Re: Yes That's Me Part 2
The poem it's small and simple yet carries a deep meaning that feels heavy and profound. Even though the words are simple, the emotions they convey run deep, reflecting struggles ...
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Re: everything just stops, i don't want you like a best friend
Ohhh...First love is a memory that stays hidden in the heart, a soft and sweet whisper that never fades. It begins with a first crush, a fleeting feeling that makes ...
Dec 22, 2024 -
Re: winter in moscow
It's truly a beautiful memory, one that flows like water every time we feel a deep connection. It's such a blessing to have a sister like that—a soulmate and a ...
Dec 22, 2024 -
Re: Mirror
The plot was truly captivating, as it vividly portrays the emotions that define a lifetime. There’s a time in life when everyone feels beautiful, with moments when even the simplest ...
Dec 22, 2024 -
Re: burnt pansies ripped apart
Ohh...that's really deep. I can completely understand your perspective. The one who truly experiences these struggles definitely goes through a tough time. As for the poem, in the third line, ...
Nov 21, 2024 -
Re: Hybrids: Chapter One
Hi...it's me again a quick review from my POV In the quiet of the facility, Yagi and Sako found comfort in each other’s company. Their beds were close enough that ...
Sep 29, 2024 -
Re: Final Ritual
Hi...welcome to YWS Here my thoughts about the poem.Sending away a loved one is an incredibly emotional journey, one that I can relate to deeply after experiencing a recent loss. ...
Sep 29, 2024 -
Re: i keep inviting death into my life
Heyy...here to give a quick review from my point of view The poem captures the mysterious journey between life and death, reflecting on a deep connection with a loved one. ...
Sep 29, 2024
