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  • Short Story » Teen Fiction, Other Re: The Diary of the Sluttiest Virgin - Chapter 2

    Heya, Charley! I must say that I really enjoyed reading this chapter, short as it may be. Nowadays I've noticed more and more works that deal with sex issues (which ...

    Aug 16, 2013
  • » Re: My Favourite Graveyard

    Hey there, ajt! Some song this must be :3 I instantly loved your use of imagery through out the song and stuff. (Even though some of them were, like, too ...

    Jul 26, 2013
  • Novel / Chapter » Other, Fantasy Re: The Apprentice's Tale

    Hi Aria! Alpha here ^^ I'm glad to have finally read something by you :) (cos you ROCK AND ROAR, girl!) Aaaaynyways. First, I just want you to know how ...

    Jun 24, 2013
  • Novel / Chapter » Romantic, Mystery / Suspense Re: Untitled - Chapter 1

    Hello, there! First let me begin by saying that I like your piece. It's a good prologue, although it didn't really *hook* me in the way a mystery should. Which ...

    Jun 18, 2013
  • Script » Realistic, Realistic Re: Old and Grey

    Ya halla, Ilham! I'm here to review, as promised. So let's start with ze critique: It was my first Pharmacology lecture when it all begun. Cool start. It's reeling, it's ...

    Feb 11, 2013
  • Poetry » Humor, General Re: Epic Journey

    Hey there, Kasim! I see that you've been around here a while, odd not to have seen you at a point. Oh, well, off to the review! Let's start with ...

    Feb 9, 2013
  • Novel / Chapter » General, Culture Re: Untitled - Part 1 & 2

    Heyaz :) Silly ant, couldn't you get your own glass? So, I'm here to chain you, dress you in a wig, make you juggle, and laugh at you. Kidding. Let's ...

    Feb 4, 2013
  • Short Story » Fantasy, Humor Re: Paul The Unicorn and the Magical Carrot Pie

    Eeeerm. I dont know how to break this to you, but this isn't even remotely funny. There was no humor (or if there is, it's probably squashed by all this ...

    Feb 4, 2013
  • Novel / Chapter » Historical Fiction, General Re: Effy's War- 2

    Greetings, Miss Bethy! I'm following this story! Sounds like a lovely, interesting novel. A couple of parts made me smile, Effy and Tommy's close relationship is sweet, I lovedlovedlovedlovedLOVED the

    Feb 3, 2013
  • Short Story » Humor, General Re: Diary of an African Teen: My Dad

    Hujambo! This is an interesting piece. Kinda short but that's okay. So first, the nitpicks? (It feels kinda weird to review something by someone older than me.) Dad [colour=red]('s) no ...

    Dec 21, 2012
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: Lord of Lies

    Hey there, Ita! Where did that come from? Erm... Anyways. When I read your poem, I was honestly like for some weird reason. Okay, I'm over it- Hey! I didn't ...

    Oct 31, 2012
  • Short Story » Romantic, Historical Fiction Re: Twas the Summer of '69

    Hi there! ...for taking so darn long to write this review. Okay, to summerize this piece in one word: Like, in every aspect. Emotions, setting, characters... everything, really, was perfect. ...

    Oct 5, 2012
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Eyes Down

    Wowowowowowowoowowowowoow! This poem is beautiful! Usually I don't like poems that dont rhyme but yours still has this musical ring to it. Awesome vivid imagery, a concept/idea that can span ...

    Sep 13, 2012
  • Poetry » Fantasy, Romantic Re: Greatest of them all

    Hi! Welcome to YWS! Dear beauty who deserves love Gentle eyes reflecting kindness Friendly to blue like it a butterfly This line is a bit confusing. Do you meant 'it's'? ...

    Sep 13, 2012
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: A Story of a Ship and its Sailor

    Wow. I mean... just wow. That's a very powerful poem you've written there and I absolutely love it. It has an excellent message told in verse, although honestly I couldn't ...

    Nov 10, 2011


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