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  • Lyrics » General, General Re: Santa in the sky and WobWob christmas

    Hey! Funny works, Bonkers :) All that musical stuff made my head whirl! I know commenting on them would be out of place and all, but I'll just give a ...

    Dec 11, 2012
  • Novel / Chapter » Teen Fiction, Realistic Re: The Other Alice Gracelyn [Chapter One]

    Hey Storyweaver :D Just here for a short tweaking of grammar-related stuff on the piece :) Although I won't actually focus on the aesthetics, I must say that I'm greatly ...

    Oct 29, 2012
  • Other » General, Realistic Re: To My Future Daughter

    Hey Michael. Alf here for a review. So, I was shocked to see, like, I dunno, more than forty praise to your piece. Unfortunately, I think it needs a lot ...

    Oct 29, 2012
  • Short Story » Mystery / Suspense, Supernatural Re: The graveyards Ghost

    Hey Speedster, sorry for being so laaate! But here I am for a review! It was a great read all-in-all :D I really liked the serene writing and the subtle ...

    Oct 28, 2012
  • Short Story » Fantasy, Narrative Re: Part I: The World Beyond the Windows

    Aurrora! Sorry for the very late review! I never knew you posted in my thread, sorry! Anyways, here's a little piece of my mind on your piece :D THE FIRST ...

    Oct 28, 2012
  • Short Story » Realistic, General Re: Not Hypothetically Dead Anymore

    Hey, Puck. Just dropping by to see how's it going with Hypothetically Dead Man. I'll just pop in some comments. Again, I love the modern use of wordplay. The section ...

    Oct 25, 2012
  • Short Story » Literature, Realistic Re: The Hypothetically Dead Man Returns

    Hahaha! Sorry for the late review! But here I am! I can't stop smiling :D ! There's a sequel for the hypothetically dead man! I can't wait reading the piece. ...

    Aug 26, 2012
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Fantasy Re: Welcome to Orba Nova Revised Chapter 1-3

    A lot has reviewed your piece, so I'll just give a short critique on what I've read. Okay, so the story's all good. It's not that perfect, but it can ...

    Aug 26, 2012
  • Lyrics » Romantic, Realistic Re: Seventeen

    Carlito! Here's my review! Sorry for it's late-ness, but hey, better late than never, right? Let's get on first with the title. Well a one-shot title is okay with me! ...

    Aug 15, 2012
  • Article / Essay » Realistic, General Re: I Am Very Enthusiastic

    Hey ShadVy! I'm sorry for the late review! I know this might be late for the porgram itself, so I'll just give a Point Out so that you will be ...

    Aug 15, 2012
  • Short Story » Literature, Realistic Re: The hypothetically dead man

    Puck! Sorry for the super late review! But still, here I am for one! Since there are already reviews more focused on the aesthetic aspect of the piece, I'll focus ...

    Aug 15, 2012
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Sorrow

    Nargee, dear, sorry for the very late review! I'll just double my effort of giving a better review! Here I am! So, the title. Short sweet and to the point. ...

    Aug 12, 2012
  • Novel / Chapter » Realistic, Fantasy Re: PR: The Conjurer Wars - Ch 2 part 1

    Artsy! Sorry I'm suuuper late for the review. I forget to close up shop, see, because I was very busy for the past few weeks. But here am I, trying ...

    Aug 12, 2012
  • Poetry » Spiritual, General Re: Within the Sands

    Good day, Ben, my man! A review from me to you :) ! I'll give a special one, too, the Point Out. PUNCTUATION HELPS We all know that grammar is ...

    Jun 24, 2012
  • Poetry » General, General Re: The Magnolia Leaf

    Casp! Me again! I'm sorry if you're seeing my name over and over again, it's just that I want to give poems good reviews today. I'm not sure if it'll ...

    Jun 24, 2012


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