Aley

Well, I'm sorry to see that it was interpreted wrong. >>; Maybe you would be willing to help me figure out where the interpretation is faulty. I don't mean to ...

I have it set up like this because it's a nonet, so it has to decrease by one syllable each line, and that happened to be where the line had ...

I apologise too if I somehow offended you too.

I have no idea why you are suddenly defining all these words. I know what they all mean. That being said I think you misinterpreted my transition and recollections. It ...

Thanks for the feedback! Yeah, I put in the stuff about the water because I actually knew that fact about overwatering ^^ This is actually kind of confessional because I've ...

Thanks for the review! It's really helpful to know that the message I was thinking of didn't quite get across the way I wanted it to, but that you're close. ...

Not at all, i was worried it was cliche but if i got it wrong it is more original which i love

Oh yay! I'm so glad I'm off

Hey Alli, This is a really old piece so I am mostly going off of what I know. The quote thing is because it's a paraphrase from Hamlet's famous speech. ...

Hey Lake, what you're picking up on is the pantoum structure. If you click the link in the poem you can read what a pantoum is.

Mm, no, but it does have to rhyme, so every other line has to rhyme. Meaning like, the red lines have to rhyme with the reds, the green have to ...

Oh whoops XD It's line three and then line one in the final stanza >> I need to fix mine

Hey salmintea! Thank you so much for the review! I was basically thinking "The washing machine is loud" and "Ooo, this sounds cool. I wonder what words I can use ...

Do you want me to take another crack at it or are you going to re-post?

Oh thank god xD