I love how this poem manages to say a lot through little. It also does a very well job of describing the political climate of what I assume is the states.
I think the reference to the wall was very well put, and really lent a deeper understanding to your stance on the matter. The 'mongrel' part was also perfectly understood - and I just have to say, I agree.
I also enjoyed the narrative of the poem, the evolvement of keeping peace with those you disagree with to revolting against their hatred. The part about the nuclear power is also very clever, alluding to the threat of nuclear war the U.S always seems to be facing or creating. The line "nuclear power. We hit the button." struck such a chord with me, the idea of taking something fearful and full of hatred and turning it towards the oppressors for our own gain.
Also, I had to look up what an acrostic was, but I really enjoyed coming back and reading the first letter of every line. "I'm sorry for the pain" perfectly sums up a lot of the U.S's politics right now.
This was a joy to read and I'm glad you wrote it.
Keep writing!
- J.
Points: 88
Reviews: 134
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