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What I mean is make ideas for how to show what you want to express, five different ideas for how to say it. You can stay with flight but how ...

Ohhhhhh that makes so much more sense now XD Alright, well if you're going for a bunch of different characters, it might make more sense to have them split up ...

Hey felistia, This isn't a review, just a comment, check this out Fire and Ice . It's another Fire and Ice poem done by Robert Frost. It's your competition for ...

Okay, I changed that section. I am keeping my colon cuz I'm listing things which give her up-dos and dancing shoes, and colons come before lists.

Hey ^^ So with "burning friends to aim" I was talking about how Apollo XIII needed to do controlled burns in order to re-direct their shuttle to the exact right ...

I think part of the fun of poetry is that when the thread is obvious, like a bright red in a sea of green, finding all the underlying strands that ...

Hey, thanks for the explanation. I do appreciate it. However I stand by what I think you could do in the review. Poems without this level of complexity are just ...

Yeah, waay better

If you're doing it for KotGR you can claim a prize for writing a review and me snagging it from you~

You can edit your work by being on this page and looking up under your author info. There should be an edit button somewhere in there ^^

Yeah, I know "i" isn't the poet. I just don't always want to write out "the speaker" because that gets old fast.

Hey Captain, I'm really happy you were honest with me. I appreciate that. What I was going for was actually visual poetry, so the part that you quoted, I actually ...

Hahaha! Oh my god that's great! I'm so happy that "perched" was right. That's totally perfect

Yup! You don't need to accept it. We have resources for that. The easiest way is to hold shift when you hit enter if you're typing it directly, or if ...

Hey Unashamed116, Thanks for your comments. I appreciate that you enjoyed my work. Personally I feel like the era of rhyming poetry is the past. I mean, there are some ...