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Kite runner Assignment

The main protagonist Amir has a very interesting relationship with his father Baba, he once thought, "You can't love a person who lives that way without fearing them too. Maybe even hating them a little." (Amir) Throughout the book The Kite Runner the main protagonist Amir is constantly trying to attain his father love and acceptance. However his father's love is focused more on their servants Hassan and his father Ali which later we learn that Hassan is actually Baba’s son, but since he is the son of a servant girl, for Baba to be still respected no one could know. This creates a secret relationship that takes Baba’s focus off of Amir and onto Hassan. A recreation of this has been created in the 2007 film adaptation(screenplay written by David Benioff) to the book, but has not fully grasped the character growth of Amir and himself becoming his own person. Throughout the book Amir is developing and showing his strength through words. This is very simple for him to do because he is a writer. In the book The Kite Runner Amir grows and becomes his own person through the experiences he has, when he chooses to use his words when talking to the director of the orphanage. He also displays this when Hassan was rapped and Amir’s only weapon was words and he couldn’t use it. Later on in the book when Amir is older and he uses his words instead of becoming violent when speaking to Assef and with defending his cousin Sohrab against his father in law. These are the ways Amir discovers his own power, which is the power of words.

When Amir was looking for Sohrab he went into an orphanage where he suspected Sohrab was. It was a very frustrating situation for Amir because the director wasn’t telling him much because he thought they wanted to hurt the boy. Instead of Amir getting physically aggressive or tough like Baba he was calm and used the power of his words so extract information from the man. Amir said, “Look, I knew Sohrab’s father. His name was Hassan. His mother’s name was Farzana. He called his grandmother Sasa. He knows how to read and write. And he’s good with the slingshot. There’s hope for this boy, Agha, a way out. Please open the door.” (Amir) This approach that Amir used shows his progression in becoming his own person, opposed to what Baba’s approach may have been which could have been more aggressive or since he is known to be trusted he could respond insulted because it is as if the people are not trusting him. The reason why Amir had to use this approach was because the director did not know whether to trust Amir or not, but Baba was already trusted so did not have that issue. The other reason why Amir chose this approach was because since he is a writer and his power in in his words. This shows the beginning of Amir’s growth in becoming his own man and demonstrating power in his own way. The other reason why Amir was able to convey this message so clearly was because since he was in America for so long he was able to develop his power of words and was now able to convey this effectively. Also it made the reader feel as if Kabul was a foreign place because it had been about 100 pages since Amir had been there which gets the reader thinking and also makes it feel like a long time for the protagonist and the reader. The movie does not have this because if it did it would be a 5 hour movie and because it does not show that change in time the movie lacks in being able to show Amir’s growth. Due to his independence and him standing up for something he believes in his father would be proud which is what he wanted from the beginning.

After the kite fight Hassan ran to get the kite that Amir had just caught but got cornered into a wall by Assef the main antagonist in The Kite runner. Amir went looking for Hassan and found him getting rapped. This scared both boys for the rest of their life, and many people would argue that Amir was not Hassan’s true friend because he didn’t do anything, but Amir’s power is words and at that exact moment he didn’t feel his words could do anything so instead of doing what Baba does and goes in bold and strong, so Amir did nothing. Due to the fact that Hassan knew Amir had watched this and done nothing he felt embarrassed and alone. Earlier in the book Assef said, “Afghanistan is the land of the Pashtuns. It always has been, always will be. We are the true Afghans, the pure Afghans, not this Flat-nose here. His people pollute our homeland, our watan. They dirty our Blood.” (Assef) When Assef said “Flat nose” he was referring to Hassan and when the author did this he foreshadowed that Assef would do something to Hassan. Some would say Amir was warned and the fact that he didn’t do anything was the opposite of growth and did not help him become his own person. This is incorrect though because since he was a child he did not have very much confidence to begin with and since he was powerful and persuasive through his voice which was not viewed among children as powerful, Amir felt that there was nothing he could have possibly done. The book had dream sequences and internal thinking that told the reader what was going on inside Amir’s head. This helped strengthen the reader's understanding that Amir was growing and discovering the power of language. The movie lacks this section of the novel which takes away from the film, which makes the film impossible to show that Amir grew and discovered the power of words. This was because he was growing internally more than externally, he leads up to his strength, it does not just come out of nowhere. For this reason the way Amir responded to Hassan getting raped and his later comprehension of the event actually strengthened himself growing as his own person and defining what it is to be powerful for himself.

To get Sohrab back from the Taliban Amir must first speak to the captain, which happened to turn out being Assef. Instead of making demands aggressively, he used his words in a calm tone and did not use aggression. Assef tells the guards that if Amir leaves the room then he can leave because he has earned his freedom. Assef then beats Amir and Amir does nothing, and Sohrab ends up shooting his slingshot at Assef’s eye and Amir and Sohrab leave safely. This is what happened in the book, however in the movie Assef does not tell his guards to let Amir leave if he wins the fight. Since he did not tell them that when Amir leaves there is a gun fight and that takes away from the scene that has just occurred. It changes the focus from Amir’s personal strength and development and shifts it to a gunfight and an action scene. For this reason the book demonstrates that Amir grows as a character more in the book rather than the movie.

Sohrab was Hassan’s son and when Amir went to Afghanistan to see Rahim Khan before Rahim died he told Amir that Hassan and his wife was killed but Hassan’s son was still alive. After Amir got Sohrab from the Taliban he brought him back to America and Sohrab was living with Amir and his wife. Hassan was something called a Hazara and they were considered to be lower than the average Muslim. Amir’s wife's father was named general Taheri and he was considered to be a higher class well respected Muslim and was not pleased when Amir brought him home. He said “Amir Jan, you’re going to tell us why you have brought back this boy with you?” (General Taheri) THe general had said this to Amir in a stern and parenting voice because General Taheri was concerned people would talk about a Hazara boy living with his daughter and he found the embarrassing and degrading. Amir’s response is the most prominent example of his growth and him not doing what his father considers power, but what his speciality of power is. Amir says, “ You see, General Sahib, my father slept with his servants wife. She bore him a son named Hassan. Hassan is dead now. That boy sleeping on the couch is Hassan’s son. He’s my nephew. That’s what you tell people when they ask.” (Amir) This shows Amir’s growth and his differentiation from his father's way of power because his father would have been more physical and maybe slightly more aggressive. Not physical violence, but just aggressive language, opposed to Amir’s approach which was very calm and truthful. This is demonstrated in numerous other ways throughout The Kite Runner, which further strengthens the idea that throughout The Kite Runner Amir continues to grow and become his own man which his father would be proud of.

"Now, no matter what the mullah teaches, there is only one sin, only one. And that is theft. Every other sin is a variation of theft... When you kill a man, you steal a life. You steal his wife's right to a husband, rob his children of a father. When you tell a lie, you steal someone's right to the truth. When you cheat, you steal the right to fairness... There is no act more wretched than stealing, Amir." (Baba) Amir’s father is a strong and powerful man and throughout the book The Kite Runner Amir discovers that the strength his father had is not the only kind of strength. Amir finds strength in words when he defends Sohrab against General Taheri and gives his father in law justification for why Sohrab is living with him. He also finds strength in his words when he is talking to the director of the orphanage and while he is meeting with Assef for the ability to bring Sohrab back to America. Finally the last example of when Amir shows development in the power of words is when he actually says nothing while Hassan is getting raped. He does this because since his power is in words and this was a physical confrontation he felt there was nothing he could do. The movie does not convey the message that Amir develops power through words and for this reason the book is better than the movie.

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alexblackwell
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Hello there Blenny!
I finished reading The Kite Runner today and the movie just got over. I am still not over the story and feel that there should have been more to the movie. Although the story was very predictable half-way towards the book, I had fun. Khaled Hosseini has painted a beautiful masterpiece and did it again with A thousand splendid suns.

Now, coming to reviewing you review. I would say if is a fairly good review. I believe this is for a school paper. I hope you scored a good grade.

I don't understand why you have put ''(Amir)'' in the first paragraph. That was completely unnecessary. Repetition of a character's name steals the charm.

I personally don't think Baba's attention was focused more on Hassan. He loved them both equally. Just that it is difficult to believe that a person can love his servant's son the same way he loves his own, so ore attention is drawn towards it. ''However his father's love is focused more on their servants Hassan and his father Ali which later we learn that Hassan is actually Baba’s son, but since he is the son of a servant girl, for Baba to be still respected no one could know. '' This sentence could have been better formed. Maybe it is just me and my short attention span, but I had to read that line four times slowly before I could make sense out of it.
think you haven't successfully edited the typos. ''rapped'' remains unchanged.
Amir does fight Assef. Infact. he says that he gave him a pretty good fight.

The unnecessary wide space after the first paragraph. Like why?

You are trying to make an impression that Amir was not violent and used his power of words, I am not really satisfied with that.

Again ''(Amir)''. It is clearly stated by you that Amir said,''..''
I believe that Hassan was the kite runner and not Amir. But is is individual perspective, not a problem really.
I wish you had written more about the relationship between Amir and Shorab.

It is a nice and long review. Having the patience to write this is difficult.

Have a nice day!!
Cheers,
Alex Blackwell.

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Sujana
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Hey, back again. Seeing as you've already got your fair share of reviews, I'll keep it short: loved it, want to see more from you. Though I do suggest working out some spelling errors (rapped or raped?) and more than a few capitalization problems, I found the rest to be very intriguing. Great work.

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Aley
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Aley wrote a review · Thu Dec 10, 2015 7:46 pm

Hey, so you asked me to review and that's what I'm here to do!

I'd like to say that your review actually had a well rounded development to it. You have the supplementary language that you need to support your claim and you show both things that work towards your hypothesis and against it, which you disprove. This creates a nice, well rounded argument, and gives you a good base to start editing from. You do, however, need editing.

You have a lot of typos. Some of them are potentially because you don't know or use the english rules as they should be used, others might be just because you're still learning how to write papers, but I'll go over them for you. I'm only going to go over the ones in what I believe is the action paper and not the assignment.

The Typos.

In-text Citation:
I'm not quite sure how you're learning to do this, but it is my understanding you need a space both before and after the citation block so this:

"You can't love a person who lives that way without fearing them too. Maybe even hating them a little."1(Amir)Throughout the book The Kite Runner the main protagonist Amir is constantly trying to attain his father love and acceptance.
becomes
"You can't love a person who lives that way without fearing them too. Maybe even hating them a little." 1(Amir) Throughout the book The Kite Runner the main protagonist Amir is constantly trying to attain his father love and acceptance.


Also, in MLA style formatting, it should be ""Quote goes here" (Amir 1). Next sentence goes here" but I don't think you're using MLA, so I'm not sure what it should look like for you. However, I do have a resource where you can find out.

Purdue Online Writing Lab Use this website and search how to do in text citation in your teacher's required style, or ask your teacher.

Capitalization
This is a big one! You must, Must, MUST capitalize the first letter of a name. It's a proper noun! Proper nouns need to be capitalized. How am I supposed to tell if it's a name or some object if it's not capitalized? At least if it's capitalized I only have to guess among the proper nouns.

Put this document into word or some other place you can use the search function and search all of the names. Any name you see that is not capitalized such as Amir a few times, Assef, and Sohrab several times, capitalize them, they need it.

Then go through and make sure each of The Kite Runner titles are appropriately capitalized. All three words should be capitalized every time, and they should always be in italics because it's a book.

Just getting rid of these simple typos will increase your points dramatically. It shows you proof-read and edited. Your teacher will know you care.

America also has to be capitalized because it's also a name. It's a name of a country.

Taliban is a name of a group, and should be capitalized.

Muslim is a name of a group/religion, and should be capitalized.

Spelling

You actually did really good with this, there are only a couple.

I put this in a spoiler because reviews are subject to everyone and this first one is delicate stuff to talk about.

Spoiler
Rapped = raped. Search rapped in your paper like you did the names, and make it raped. To say they rapped would be like the Epic Rap Battles. Singers rap, and when they have finished rapping, they have rapped. It's a soft a instead of a hard a like rape, or cape, or shake.


"scen" is in your paper. It should be scene.

"THe" is in your paper, it should be The because it's at the start of a sentence after a quote. I'm happy to see you have the space after the citation for most of them. It's just that first one which I'll get into with you later.

"speciality" is also in your paper. Okay, so this one. This is British English vs American English. Speciality is British English, and specialty is American English. It depends on which you use.
If Colour is correct to you, you are using and should follow British English.
If Color is correct to you, you are using and should follow American English.

And I believe that's it for typos. Overall, you basically just have stuff you need to proofread with these typos. Go slow, look at names, look at spacing, look at capitalization and remember that everything which is a proper noun is capitalized. You can tell if it's a proper noun if it deliniates or points to one specific thing rather than multiple things, such as The Eiffel Tower vs tower, or Great Dane vs dog. A Great Dane is a specific breed, thus it is a proper noun because it points to one breed instead of all dogs. However, if you say collie, there are many different types of collies like Border Collies and the specific breed Collie, which shows why it's important. If I said collies are finicky eaters, then it would include Border Collies too. If I said Collies are finicky eaters, then that's just that specific breed and excludes Border Collies.

Now onto the major revision things.

First, it is not recommended to ever start a paper with a quote. There is a reason for this; if you start a paper with a quote you don't have any room to introduce the quote and you are giving your opening line to someone else. You want that place of power to be yours, even if it's for something brief like a trite
The highly influential Dr. Martin Luther King once said "I have a dream that my four little children will one day live in a nation where they will not be judged by the color of their skin but by the content of their character" and today that dream is still fighting to come true ("I Have a Dream").


You can introduce a lot with framing a quote like that, and it gives you a lead in and out of the quote.

Whenever you are using quotes, you need to lead in and out of it by introducing it and the point it is going to make, then lead out of it by summarizing it and reinforcing how it makes the point. The reason we do this is because words are interpreted differently for everyone. Connotation is what poets like me love to play with, it's our area of expertise, if you will. You may read a quote and think it's really obvious how that quote relates to what the point was, but if someone sees a different connotation, then you might have just lost your biggest argument. Instead, you tell them what your interpretation of that quote is as well as providing them the quote to read for themselves. This proves it was in the reading, and provides how you read it thus reinforcing your point.

Actually, this is one of the things that you do well in the rest of the paper, but it's because of this that you should not start a paper with a quote.

One thing you also do poorly in your first paragraph which doesn't seem to be a problem elsewhere is the run on sentences. Your first paragraph is really jumbled up, probably because you wrote it first, so let me give you some tips on writing papers.

Outline the points you want to make, get all of your quotes together, and have them close. Write down your thesis or your main point you're trying to prove. Use this as your starting point and your place holder for your introduction paragraph. Don't write the introduction paragraph. Skip right to the first body paragraph, right to the first point you want to make. Use your space. Don't just stick to five paragraphs if you can, but expand and weave through your argument just using the five paragraph essay as a guide for your outline. This will make reading each paragraph quicker and keep on track during the paragraph so you don't try to stuff too much information in one paragraph.

Once you've written your conclusion, then go back and write your introduction, and edit your first body paragraph. The reason being, the introduction paragraph has to know what it is introducing. If your thesis changed halfway through the paper, then you're going to need to revise the first paragraphs up to the point where it changed, and the intro would have been useless anyway. Don't be afraid of that either, but let your topic develop as you make your arguments, and cut out unwanted arguments after you're done.

Once you've got all of this taken care of, that's when you know what the paper is about and you can write a clear introduction paragraph and include any pertinent information gradually through the paper instead of stuffing it all in on top.

So, where does that leave you now? I would suggest you rewrite your first paragraph, and allow more space for the information you're trying to stuff in. Yes, you need to include your argument and the points you're going to be using, but you don't need to do it all in one sentence. If you want to include it all in one sentence, then at least use shorter arguments. We don't need the evidence, just the basic signal that it is your argument. The evidence will be later.

Hopefully this is what you were expecting from me. I hope you go over the paper and edit the typos, and after you've revised the first paragraph or two, go back over it again and do the name searches again to make sure you didn't make the same mistake again, which is likely. We write how we write after all, and peers are only good to tell you what you need to know about your writing to edit. So, now that you know you have a problem remembering to capitalize names, always check your names before turning in a paper. When you weren't so panicked to get it all down, you were a lot better at the people names, but you still have to do proper nouns too like America.

If you have any questions, feel free to contact me.

Aley

I made the changes you said and I don't know why there are no foot notes but i have them on a second document, would you be able to take a second look because I have added a few more things and can you look to see if there are any other edits that can be make .
Thank you for your time.

This writer is a literary genius. Blenny has incredible use of quotes and MLA formatting. The plethora of run-on sentences and incorrect grammar are an interesting, yet genius choice making his formal book review incredibly unique. I hope that this young writer has is discovered, I can't wait to read more from this author. 12 thumbs up!!!

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I messed up still learning to use this website. This part of the Essay wasn't supposed be in there it was just my thinking.





I want to prove that amir’s character grew throughout the book.(this person has read the book)

I want to prove that he didn’t grow and if you watch the movie you can see his degrowth.(this person has only seen the movie and thinks that the first person is just talking about the kite runner in general.

Idea:

Amir’s character building and how power can be described in Amir’s own way not just with physical strength.

Useful:

Growth(Book)

-General tahari Amir defends sohrab

-In the book Amir uses his words and doesn’t get physical with director

-When Hassan was rapped Amirs one weapon was words and he couldn’t use it

-Amir tried to use his words to persaud Assef instead of getting violent

DisGrowth (movie)

-in the movie amir gets physical with the director of the orphanage like his father which shows he is trying to be like his father and not his own person

-in the movie the amir actor had little to no emotion which is a sign usually of physical strength which is more like Baba

You can edit your work by being on this page and looking up under your author info. There should be an edit button somewhere in there ^^

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Sujana
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When you hear bae's name in a review.

I am definitely going to read this later.



Powerful men have a way of avoiding consequences.
— Dr. Harrison Wells, The Flash