Aley

Hey Ruro, I realized this poem doesn't have a really good review with a lot of content comments. First off, I'd like to say that after reading your poetry through ...

Hey Strange! So nice to see you here. First off I would like to say that I think your poem is really compact and concise, I really like that about ...

Hello sagnik, I'm Aley and I'm here to review your poem. I will start by saying that I think you have a good subject matter. The way you described the ...

Hey WishUponAStar! Welcome to YWS. I think this poem is working in very little space to do something pretty cool. I like how you develop the understanding of woodpeckers and ...

Hello lburkeen12, First off, welcome to YWS! I hope you're finding this a fun place to read and review as well as submit. If you have any questions, search for ...

Hello Beeyaay, I think you've got a really good rhythm with the poem. Working with the sounds of the words and creating slant rhymes like voice and voiceless is a ...

Hello my Royal Highness! I thought you had a good tactic to go about the poem. Using repetition in poetry as a beginning refrain for every line is popular. They ...

Hello Purple, I really like how you are handling a single word in this poem and really examining it for what it is and what it is not. You have ...

Hi Pan, Congratulations on having the oldest poem in the Green Room currently. I read your authors note at the bottom, you don't really want reviews, so I'm not going ...

Hello TenThousand! First off, I have to say that I love the way you're writing this. The humor in the plot and the blatant openness about breaking the fourth wall ...

Hello FantasyDragon01, I'm happy welcome you into our humble poeting group. I'm glad to see that you're reviewing a lot too. For your services to others, but mostly because you ...

Hello! I really like how you are willing to explore with your capitalization and punctuation when you're writing this. I feel like that's something you're doing well. The more you ...

Hello Maya22! I'm glad to see that you've come back and posted something. Welcome to YWS! I like to see that you're not bothering with the capitalization and stuff that ...

Hey Morrigan... Magpie~ I really liked this poem. I feel like you've got a good image that's very well developed in it and you're working with enough content for the ...

Hey Deanie! Overall I really liked this poem. It has a lot of nice rich detail like the boots, and your use of language is very verbal. That made it ...