Aley

Hey Alice, I like this poem a lot better than your others. I've reviewed quite a few of them and I think this one has the best use of words ...

Hey KeepWriting, I have to say this poem was underwhelming for me. You do a good technical job of keeping the same flow throughout the poem. It's nice to see ...

Hey Jumpingsheep, This is a really beautiful peace. You have such a wonderful way to capture the motions and stillness of loss with your word choice, descriptors, and flow that ...

Hey KeepWriting, This was really cute. I actually laughed. Unfortunately it's not about long and fancy words, it's about using poetic devices, and flow is one of them, so you ...

Hey TheShauzer, You requested a review from me back when this was new. I um, didn't get to it, until now ^^;;;; so sorry. You might not even be around ...

Hey AliceAfternoon, I like this better than Marigold ^^ You get more into a story with this. This poem has a lot of potential to make several good smaller poems, ...

Hey AliceAfternoon, I'm going to start by saying that I think you're developing a story with this poem. You've got characters, setting, and history in that story, but you're sort ...

Hey Darkmindedemo, So you asking us to rip this to shreds, which means I have leeway to give you a long review. This particular poem you've got here has a ...

Hey PomPom! So like I said, I don't understand why you're going into so much detail in the first half of this stanza, because it just is making the poem ...

Hey Stranger, I liked this one better than the last one I reviewed of yours. I think it has better flow. I really think that you need to work on ...

Hey Stranger! I actually really like this poem. I think you have a good connection between the stanzas. I'm not sure why you labeled them though. The labeling seems pointless. ...

Hey PomPom, so since this is a longer poem, i read it and reviewed it at the same time. These are my reading notes. Stanza One Ribcage, Really? I feel ...

Hello elcuidador, I'm Aley, and I'm here to review your poem. First off, I'd like to say that I think you have a really good grasp on rhymes. I like ...

Hey Anniepoo103, I'd like to give you a few quick thoughts about this poem. The first thing I'd like to say is that you've got more of a lyric here ...

Hey Cole, So I think most of this poem is really good. I like how you keep the tone of mystery throughout it and really explore, or try to explore, ...