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Hey MichaelaBobbin, Overall I think you have a good eye for detail when it comes to paintings, and I like that about your review. You describe the artwork very well ...

Hey Morrigan, Reading this makes me want more of your poetry. Oh wait! It's NaPo >D Anyway, I think you do a really good job working in the emotion of ...

Hey Cowboy, So overall I feel like this poem really rushes through itself, and I think that part of it is because of the short quick sentences, the quick phrasing, ...

Hey Lizzy, Overall I have to say that the poem is very clear and because of that, I appreciate it. The clarity of this poem allows the lyrical quality of ...

Hey Alice, You definitely have a style of poetry that you seem to be sticking to. Maybe it's because it's NaPo and you're writing from that perspective, maybe not. Probably ...

Hey KeepWriting, Here to review. Overall, I thought this was cute. The use of rhyme and the limerick qualities to the poem really stood out. That being said, when horses ...

Hey SereneSimpliciT I really like the story aspects of this book. You have a huge story here and I think that's really part of the strength of this story. You ...

Hey LonelyMountain Happy Review Day! I have to say that this was a little underwhelming in general. The language in this feels really forced so while you've got a good ...

Hey TahaT11n! I'm sorry to announce this actually isn't a haiku, and the syllables are actually wrong. The first line has the appropriate 5, but the next line only has ...

Hello Summerinthecity! This is a really impacting piece, like, I read it and literally got shocked by what it said when it said that they were talking about exploding heads. ...

Hey soundofmind, Happy Review Day! I really like how you incorporate feelings into this poem, and memories. I think you do that really well. You are really using everything in ...

Hello! Happy Review Day! First off I'd like to say that this is quite an interesting way to do a poem. I think you've really got some talent in storytelling/narrative ...

Hey Foxy, Happy Review day! I think you do a good job with the refrain. It's a good choice. You could probably add in some sort of bridge if you ...

Hey, HAPPY REVIEW DAY! This is a really touching poem by the end of it. I really love the perspective you chose to write from and I think that it ...

Hey, I really appreciate the length of this. It made it easier to review more in depth because I didn't have to shuffle through an entire huge chapter to get ...