Aley

Hey again! So I realized belatedly that I forgot to praise what you're doing here in my last review! That means this review is all going to be about what ...

Hello HobbitMan222, I'm here to give you a review on Review day! My review to you is going to be about capitalization. So here's the low down on the Upbeat ...

Hey! I'm glad to get another installment of this story. Your writing has a lot of voice. You've got a unique way of wording your sentences with lots of proper ...

Hello Jagged, I haven't seen your poetry before so I had to come check it out. I'm glad I did. I like the flow and use of imagery in this ...

Hey CallMeFreak, Very cute poem. I liked the twist at the end. Overall, I feel like you're really playing with rhyme in a creative way. You're using rhyme, and yet ...

Hey Eros, I think you're writing this more for humor than seriousness in this section because of the rerouting of the phones and all of that. It is a cute ...

Hello Eros, So basically what I have to say is that I like parts of this, and I don't like other parts. I like the idea of the plot. You ...

Hey TahaT11n, Here's the analysis. The poem "Of Summer" written by TahaT11n is a snap-shot of the modern day summer experience. The children are inside, the heat is overwhelming, and ...

DUDE, HOW IS THIS REALISTIC?! WHAT IN THE WORLD ARE YOU DOING PUTTING THIS IN REALISTIC =O HE ATE A BABY AND TURNED INTO A FREAKING DEMON! -cough- Okay, okay, ...

I agree with Hannah. Okay, so on with the review. I feel like this is too long of a moment. A Haiku should really be more like a picture, just ...

Hi Lemons, I'd like to start with saying that you've got a very old feel to your language here. You're doing a great job using that older style to your ...

Hey BornLoser, I think you've got a good way of going about introducing characters, but it's a bit of an info dump. Next time, consider spacing out character introductions over ...

Dude, good job. I really like how you're incorporating the momentary spats of haiku with this poem. You're taking just a moment here, a moment there, and building them into ...

Hey SteveBayor, I really like what you're doing with imagery in this poem. You're pushing it towards the edges of what we think about and trying to balance that fine ...

Yo Tortwag, Aley here with a couple things. Frist off, really good writing. Your forward momentum, details about the scenery, and breaks in the story for the battle things are ...