Alchemist

Hi there, finally reached the last one! I have an assumption, Zekke being Rhys, or one of those Hund Warriors. Since we have no idea about their abilities, but they ...

Hello! Can I say that I'm a bit dissapointed that you discovered about Pollume so fast? It was such a great ending to the previous chapter; reading book, flipping page ...

Hello! So, Mina is a mage too? Are they all mages? I'm confused. You should also clear things about that memory spell, that got me a bit confused too. But ...

Hello! Can I ask you for some explanations, please? I think I did get something wrong actually, and it hit me just now. First Zekke is also a mage? That ...

Allright! The main thing that bothers me here is them sleeping. After all that happened, Falyn, Zekke and even Mina would have alot of questions, and you give us nothing. ...

Allright, here again! I have to say that I'm impressed. This is by far the best chapter you have written. I didn't notice typos. No bad-written paragraph or sentences, noting ...

Hello! I'm kinda wandering: if they are the mage nation, the other being Seer, why is magic so exclusive? Why can't she use magic outside of the Lightport? Now it ...

Hello, it's me again(I can't wait to reach your present work but I really hope you don't mind reviews on these old ones first). Think you told me somewhere that ...

Hey there, back for review! An interesting chapter where you introduce additional characters, many plot possibilities as well as some interaction between the characters; it bring alot, and it is ...

Hey there! I haven't read all of the chapters yet, but I'm quite in it so far, so I decided it's time for reviews! The introduction was amazing, her dream ...

Hey there! I think your prologue is very well written, with the exception of few over-descriptions. You made it very realistic, describing the family and father. What was exactly wrong ...

Hello there, finally reached the last chapter written! xD It might not be the place, but i hope you won't insert any more monster attacking travellers on the road parts ...

K, you called for destruction, so i won't hold back! xD I get that you lost document and probably wrote this asap just to post it. Whatever happened,i think you ...

Hey there, i think i wouldnt review this if i didnt like this so much. Im really amazed. Being observer is a really serious and important topic in a modern ...

Hi there! I think you accidentaly deleted the part of the text while editing about the broken shield. I like the style of this chapter, it is the best so ...