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AkuRashomon

I used corruption because I trusted you.

  • Poetry » General, General Re: My Goodbye Poem.

    Hi, hello there! This is Ina speaking. I am here to give you a comment/review for your very sad yet hopeful poem about trying to stop something bad for your ...

    Jan 11, 2023
  • Short Story » Science Fiction, Romantic Re: I. L.O.V.E. Y.O.U.

    Hi, hello there! This is Ina speaking. I am here to write down a comment/review for your story. Since you asked me to check your other stuff and I'm interested ...

    Jan 11, 2023
  • Short Story » Fantasy, Supernatural Re: Myra’s story-Ghost house

    Hi, hello there! This is Ina speaking. I am here to give you a quick comment/review. Because I found your story interesting. "In the 1960s, there was a woman named ...

    Jan 10, 2023
  • Short Story » Dramatic, Realistic Re: The Child in the Cave

    Hi, hello there! This is Ina speaking. I am here to give you a quick comment/review of your tale. Anyways, let's through it. I love the description of the child ...

    Jan 10, 2023
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Literature Re: down the rabbit hole

    Hi, hello there! This is Ina speaking. I am back here to write you down a comment/review. By the way, this poem seems related to the first one. Is it? ...

    Jan 10, 2023
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: grow

    Hi, hello! This is Ina speaking. I am here to write down a quick comment/review. By the way, I've been eyeing this in the Green Room, it's just that I ...

    Jan 9, 2023
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Realistic Re: i am waiting for myself to be myself again

    Hi, hello there! This is Ina speaking. I am here to comment/review your "very painful poem I found in the Green Room" poem. Anyways, let's get into it. I like ...

    Jan 9, 2023
  • Lyrics » Lyrical, Fantasy Re: Crazy, creepy clowns (A parody of Spooky, scary skeletons by Andrew Gold)

    Hi, hello there. This is Ina speaking. I am here to give you a comment/review about your "something kinda crazy I found in the Green Room" writing. Wow, I love ...

    Jan 7, 2023
  • Poetry » General, General Re: a drink at brengman's

    Hi, hello there! This is Ina speaking. I am here to give you a quick comment/review. Anyways, let's get into it. I love how chill and normal this poem is. ...

    Jan 7, 2023
  • Short Story » Fantasy, Supernatural Re: Evangeline’s story

    Hi, hello! This is Ina speaking. I am here to write a little comment/review. Anyways, let's get into it. I like how mysterious this story could be. But it's pretty ...

    Jan 7, 2023
  • Article / Essay » Realistic, Narrative Re: waffle house.

    Hi, hello there! This is Ina speaking. I am here to write you a quick comment/review. Anyways, let's get into it. Is this real like did it happen to you ...

    Jan 6, 2023
  • Poetry » Narrative, Realistic Re: I Love This Website!!!

    Hi, hello. This is Ina speaking. I am here to give you a quick comment\review. Anyways, let's get into it. You're just like me, for real. I don't like WattPad, ...

    Jan 6, 2023
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: i wish to write, i wish to fish.

    Hi, hello there! This is Ina speaking. I am here to write a quick comment/review. I think this poem is vet clever yet kind of sad. Every day you try ...

    Jan 6, 2023
  • Poetry » Lyrical, Other Re: Wishes of Rain

    Hi, hello there! This is Ina speaking. I am here to give your work a quick comment\review. I love rain and I love how lyrical this poem is. I don't ...

    Jan 6, 2023
  • Lyrics » Fantasy, Supernatural Re: Lucas’ song

    Hi, hello there @vampricone6783! This is Ina speaking. I am here to give a quick comment/review. I feel like Lucas has a stronger personality yet pretty stupid, and Isabella is ...

    Jan 6, 2023


Poetry and prayer are very similar.
— Carol Ann Duffy