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  • Poetry » General, Realistic Re: Keep walking

    Hi BhavyaMehta123! This is so short and sweet! I love the meaning behind it. I love the subject here! Time passing is usually scary, but this has such a nonchalant ...

    Dec 16, 2022
  • Short Story » Fantasy, Supernatural Re: Angelic Demon

    Hi vampricone! Ooh I really like the premise here! I see a lot of the angel and demon romance trope, but I don't think it's really that common. You definitely ...

    Dec 16, 2022
  • Poetry » Realistic, General Re: When Is A War Not A War?

    Hi bnnina! Oh, this is absolutely heartbreaking. It's beautiful though. I didn't actually know about this until now, I'll admit! I don't think people talk much about camps like this ...

    Dec 16, 2022
  • Short Story » Romantic, Dramatic Re: Once, on a cold night

    Hi LizzyDear! This is quite long, but I'll take a look at it! The dynamic between the characters is really interesting I think. I'm not a big romance fan, but ...

    Dec 15, 2022
  • Poetry » Realistic, Other Re: Moons Kisses

    Hi Fab1e! Cool username! I think the moon is such a good poetry topic. It's lovely! I love the personification of the moon here! I know that it's very common ...

    Dec 15, 2022
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Realistic Re: glitter at christmastime

    Hi LadyBug! This is gorgeous. I love it so much! It's so short, but it gets the point across so well. The holiday feel to this really makes it hit ...

    Dec 15, 2022
  • Novel / Chapter » Dramatic, Romantic Re: second best - chapter one: a rocky start

    Hi juliannarexroad! I'm usually not a romance fan, but this looks promising! I like the idea! Romance is tricky to write, especially if it is romance that has ended. I ...

    Dec 13, 2022
  • Lyrics » Fanfiction, Horror Re: The Stupendous and Amazing Laughing Jack Song!

    Hi again vampricone! I like the idea behind this! Creepypastas are quite fun to look into! So lyrics! I am a bit of a songwriter myself. I think it's really ...

    Dec 11, 2022
  • Art » Realistic, General Re: Your mind, the well of wealth

    Hi akanbright! This has some really interesting material in it! I agree with a lot that is said! The mind is such a powerful thing! It's cool to see other ...

    Dec 10, 2022
  • Novel / Chapter » Fanfiction, Dramatic Re: the urn on the mantle and a shower of pink rose petals

    Hi crescentmoonprodigy! I rarely see Stranger Things fanfiction! This is fun! This is a great take on the universe! The dynamics between Belle and the other characters is refreshing honestly! ...

    Dec 10, 2022
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Theatre Re: what is, but not i?

    Hi angxlari! This is so beautiful! It's short, but that adds to the directness. The language is clear and uncomplicated, which hits hard. In just three sentences, you have created ...

    Dec 10, 2022
  • Short Story » Fantasy, Supernatural Re: The doll

    Hi vampricone6783! I love dolls! I collect them actually! =D Getting into the story, I like the feel of this! It's more paranormal and I usually don't pick those stories ...

    Dec 10, 2022
  • Short Story » General, General Re: Hugo, Little Steps

    This is adorable! I love it! I wasn't expecting it to be about a dog at first, if I'm being honest! I like how it was more vague at first, ...

    Dec 9, 2022


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