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AfterTheStorm

A Realist with Big Dreams

  • Poetry » Romantic, Realistic Re: Unfaithful Series

    Hiya, Rikkidas! The name's Storm, and I'll be reviewing your work on this lovely Review Night. xD Up, up, and away! Before I transition into the actual "meat"- so to ...

    Nov 24, 2013
  • Poetry » General, Narrative Re: Brown Eyes

    Hey, Raven! It's Storm here for a quick review on your poem! :D Let's get started. First of all, the formatting of this poem seems a bit daunting with such ...

    Nov 24, 2013
  • Poetry » Other, Supernatural Re: Can I Walk On Water?

    Hey, Timmy! The name's Storm, and I'll be your humble reviewer this late afternoon. :D First of all, welcome to YWS!!! *squishhuggles you* If you need anything, Timmy, feel free ...

    Nov 22, 2013
  • Poetry » Romantic, Dramatic Re: The Beast

    Hiya, Gravity! :D It's Storm here for a quick review. So many people can relate to this type of story, so the reader can most likely connect with it. (I ...

    Nov 18, 2013
  • Short Story » Realistic, Other Re: Why

    Hey, Jibber! It's Storm here (on this rather stormy evening) reviewing for ya! :D First off, I personally believe that you set the tone well right off the bat. The ...

    Nov 15, 2013
  • Short Story » Fantasy, General Re: Carnival of Monsters

    Hey, AG - It's Stormsie here! I hope you're having a lovely night. :D Let's jump right in, shall we? I honestly didn't find many mechanical issues throughout your story ...

    Nov 14, 2013
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Teen Fiction Re: Prologue "The island"

    Hey, Alex! The name's Storm, and I'll be reviewing for ya tonight! :) Before I begin, allow me to say that I agree with Deifyance on the statement that this ...

    Oct 19, 2013
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Me (for lack of a better title)

    Hey, Change! The name's Storm, and I'll be doing a quick review for ya this afternoon! :D Let me just say before I jump into the actual review part: I ...

    Oct 13, 2013
  • Poetry » General, General Re: My Body Has Failed Me

    Hey, Snow! The name's Storm, and I'll be doing a quick review for ya this night! :D Before I begin, I just want to let you know that this is ...

    Sep 29, 2013
  • Short Story » General, Fantasy Re: The Ring of Time--The Ring of the Future

    Hey there, Phoebe! :D The name's Storm, and I'll be reviewing for ya this afternoon. Before I jump into the actual review, allow me a moment to give you my ...

    Sep 29, 2013
  • Poetry » Fantasy, General Re: Lady of the Mists

    Hey! :D It's Storm here with a quick review. I love the comparison you made with the mist to a lady! You pulled it all together really well, considering it ...

    Sep 10, 2013
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Do I Dare?

    Hey, Weaver! :D The name's Storm, and I'll be doing a quick review for ya this afternoon. Firstly, I absolutely love the descriptions you used throughout this poem. It's beautifully ...

    Sep 9, 2013
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Romantic Re: Memories

    Hiya, Gracker! :D The name's Storm and I'll be doing a quick review for ya tonight! First off, I really like the wording you used in this short poem. It ...

    Aug 30, 2013
  • Other » Health, Horror Re: Sad story

    Hey, Mega! The name's Storm and I'll be reviewing for ya tonight. :D Before I begin, I want to let you know that you should not grow discouraged by my ...

    Aug 29, 2013
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Science Fiction Re: Star City - Chapter 2

    Good afternoon, Empress! :D *tips hat* It's Storm here again reviewing for ya. Let me just say: You've captivated me once more with this chapter; your descriptions and well-paced paragraphs ...

    Aug 11, 2013


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