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Re: Unfaithful Series
Hiya, Rikkidas! The name's Storm, and I'll be reviewing your work on this lovely Review Night. xD Up, up, and away! Before I transition into the actual "meat"- so to ...
Nov 24, 2013 -
Re: Brown Eyes
Hey, Raven! It's Storm here for a quick review on your poem! :D Let's get started. First of all, the formatting of this poem seems a bit daunting with such ...
Nov 24, 2013 -
Re: Can I Walk On Water?
Hey, Timmy! The name's Storm, and I'll be your humble reviewer this late afternoon. :D First of all, welcome to YWS!!! *squishhuggles you* If you need anything, Timmy, feel free ...
Nov 22, 2013 -
Re: The Beast
Hiya, Gravity! :D It's Storm here for a quick review. So many people can relate to this type of story, so the reader can most likely connect with it. (I ...
Nov 18, 2013 -
Re: Why
Hey, Jibber! It's Storm here (on this rather stormy evening) reviewing for ya! :D First off, I personally believe that you set the tone well right off the bat. The ...
Nov 15, 2013 -
Re: Carnival of Monsters
Hey, AG - It's Stormsie here! I hope you're having a lovely night. :D Let's jump right in, shall we? I honestly didn't find many mechanical issues throughout your story ...
Nov 14, 2013 -
Re: Prologue "The island"
Hey, Alex! The name's Storm, and I'll be reviewing for ya tonight! :) Before I begin, allow me to say that I agree with Deifyance on the statement that this ...
Oct 19, 2013 -
Re: Me (for lack of a better title)
Hey, Change! The name's Storm, and I'll be doing a quick review for ya this afternoon! :D Let me just say before I jump into the actual review part: I ...
Oct 13, 2013 -
Re: My Body Has Failed Me
Hey, Snow! The name's Storm, and I'll be doing a quick review for ya this night! :D Before I begin, I just want to let you know that this is ...
Sep 29, 2013 -
Re: The Ring of Time--The Ring of the Future
Hey there, Phoebe! :D The name's Storm, and I'll be reviewing for ya this afternoon. Before I jump into the actual review, allow me a moment to give you my ...
Sep 29, 2013 -
Re: Lady of the Mists
Hey! :D It's Storm here with a quick review. I love the comparison you made with the mist to a lady! You pulled it all together really well, considering it ...
Sep 10, 2013 -
Re: Do I Dare?
Hey, Weaver! :D The name's Storm, and I'll be doing a quick review for ya this afternoon. Firstly, I absolutely love the descriptions you used throughout this poem. It's beautifully ...
Sep 9, 2013 -
Re: Memories
Hiya, Gracker! :D The name's Storm and I'll be doing a quick review for ya tonight! First off, I really like the wording you used in this short poem. It ...
Aug 30, 2013 -
Re: Sad story
Hey, Mega! The name's Storm and I'll be reviewing for ya tonight. :D Before I begin, I want to let you know that you should not grow discouraged by my ...
Aug 29, 2013 -
Re: Star City - Chapter 2
Good afternoon, Empress! :D *tips hat* It's Storm here again reviewing for ya. Let me just say: You've captivated me once more with this chapter; your descriptions and well-paced paragraphs ...
Aug 11, 2013
