Aedomir

Author's Note I posted this back in January, but please take this and up to around #7 as a pinch of salt, I have improved leagues since then! Thank you. ...

Author's Note This is part two to the first chapter, some of you have read part one and this will not make a lot of sense unless you have. Thanks ...

Chapter One Part III “Aedomir, Aedomir! Wake up!” Aedomir’s eyes opened partway, and his vision burst into action. Above him shimmered a battle-worn face, whose hoarse lips trembled and panted ...

Chapter One Part IV He broke off at the wood’s border. Carefully, he pushed the bushes aside and stepped in. Nothing could be seen through the pitch black atmosphere… Just ...

Author's Note Hi, This might not turn out to be your favourite part, I think it's a bit boring to be honest, but I threw the idea together in about ...

Chapter Two Part II Seridon notched an arrow, and sent it hurdling towards the Kalbarc with a twang. The beast stumbled to the ground, and with a clamber tried to ...

Chapter Two Part III Aedomir looked round and caught a glimpse of the passage they had come from. A major host of Kalbarcs piled out towards Aedomir and Seridon. The ...

Author's Note: Hi guys! This is the conlcusion to chapter three, which I did not include in The Immortals in the the advanced critics forum. I have also completed a ...

Under the Eagle is the first of a series of books by Simon Scarrow, I have finished this one and will soon move onto the sequel, the Eagle's Conquest. It ...

Chapter Four:A Distant Yonder

OK, I wrote this to get out of Writer's Block. It's the most random thing I've made written, but hey! I will be introsucing more characters and I know its ...

Author's Note This is the second part of chapter four. This passes the 11k mark, and if you are still completley bewildered just let me know and I will PM ...

Chapter Four Scene Three For a long while, an elusive silence reigned. In due course, Aedomir turned back to the wound. Once, a dark shape had been engraved there, but ...

Finally, the moon sank into the black, shapeless figure of the misty yonder, and a morning sun glazed the land in a rich spell. Seridon’s words spoke of foul times, ...

Hiya! I don't know if I have read anything else of yours. the wonder capitalise the 't'. Alright, after reading this, I will be honest and say I thought it ...

Hiya! This is the first part of the revised introduction for my novel, erm... name needed! Thanks for reading, and this is my first attempt at adecent poem. Chapter One:Ash ...

My first poem! Please tell me what you think, I know it is cliche, but I don't really care at the moment. I just wanted to see if I was ...

You guys have been great so far! Please read this and tell me what you think. It is the ending to Chapter Four: The Vision of Paradise. Chapter Four, Final ...

I know, I said I may not be posting anymore of this novel, since I have lost a lot of interest but depending on how many crits I get I ...

This is very short, but I got bored and wrote this. VERY bored... I doubt I will carry on... thanks for reading! _____________ The land of Nod may seem like ...

I wrote this earlier, as a bit of history for my world. Tell me what you think! I will continue if I get some positive feedback. This was very adventurous ...

Hey guys! This is just a recently written extract from part of my novel. I just wondered what you thought of it. It won't make sense even if you have ...

Hey guys! This is my entry for On Fire, so tell me what you think! The Heart of Life She floats over the horizon, warming the lands and basking the ...

Hello! This is the prequel to my novel, Ever Wayward. So... have a look? It isn't very long, but I am worried if it is too cliche. Chapter One, Scene ...

Hey everyone! I just couldn't bear the original Chapter One anymore, I just have to change it. I am rewriting it and fleshing it out, introducing the company, and letting ...

Hey guys! The ending isn't really ending, sort of mid-dialogue (bad, I know!) Anyhow, tell me what you think? This is the almost prequel to EverWayward, so you can get ...

EDIT: I have changed this, it is now... different, shall we say. Tell me what you think please? It is intended to confuse you - but you should still be ...

Alright, so I haven't posted anything of EW for a while so I wondered if you could tell me how you think I am going with this. It doesn't make ...