AdventurerDaniel

I must say this was a marvelous poem and lyrical is an understatement it made me feel the need to ask if you're actually a singer. If so you should ...

I liked the poem it was an excellent work of a far greater quality than that which I have achieved in poetry. It's imagery was poignant but unfortunately your pen ...

Hello Persy, first of all I'd like to say that I enjoy what your trying to say here and first of all as a trained singer and as someone in ...

I liked it but the grammatical errors drove me insane also there were some weak word choices but that's no big deal. Also he wouldn't have been shocked to see ...

Okay so I liked this which is good as I can be a very harsh critic I had one major problem though which I can quickly explain. As in this ...

Okay so I'm not sure If I liked this it felt lacking it didn't stir emotion or really grasp attention. Thought maybe that wasn't your intent I wanted it to ...

I know very little of poetry but the first thing I notice is a very weak rhyme scheme. It's almost a mixture of Chaucer and Shakespeare. In my opinion for ...

I really liked this it was very amusing. By the way disregard Cali it's a script dots or parentheses with instructions are expected though I would have simply put at ...

Okay first of all look up the Dark I Know Well because this song is a poetic version of that song in my opinion. It's very aggressive and I admire ...

I really liked this poem it does speak to something fragile within people, I don't really think to be honest that a toy soldier is quite fragile enough. Maybe a ...

I enjoyed the rhythm of this poem if not some of the wording. "Intoxicate my liver" just doesn't even sound right I won't lie it was very abrupt and lacked ...

I won't lie I have also observed the odd tendency of humanity to do the opposite of what they are told and I rather hate to do this but a ...

I enjoyed reading this poem I'm terrible at writing poetry so please don't take my opinion too seriously. I do, however, happen to write monologues and one thing when writing ...

A rather brilliant poem it actually reminded of "Nothing Gold Can Stay" by Robert Frost it lamented the sorrow of beauty lost and how it's some what inevitable but it's ...

I like the flow of this poem for two reasons at some parts there wasn't much of one and at others I felt it should be rapped to a very ...