Adriana

So loooved it! Hmmm... I don't know if it's just me being too much sensitive, but I really think your poem sounds like a swing... Maybe it's the repetition of ...

Wow... When I saw your age I couldn't believe it... I mean, this is such a hard theme to discuss, and you do it soooo well. Anyway, you did a ...

It is really good! But, like every other story, it can get even better... Her mind holds no innocence nothing is pure I think it should have some punctuation between ...

Hahahaha I so loved it!!! You make us fell afraid of something before we can even identify it. It is funny (at the end, of course) and extremely real (you ...

Don't laugh but... I'm in love with your poem!! It's soooo perfect! The confusion in it just makes us get close to the character, to emphatise... I loved the lines: ...

This is SO great! It flows perfectly, has a good title, a good rhyme... And there are two things it reminded me of: Sweeney Todd, for the name of the ...

I SOOO loved it!! Wow! There's something I want to say though... In this part: A hole of time, A hole a space, A hole that leads to endless places." ...

I so liked it!!! First of all the picture. Sooo good. It gives us the idea of the poem before we could even start to read it. I just got ...

I'm not sure I got it right... Maybe it's my english skills that are not good yet (I'm brazilian), but I found it very confusing. Maybe it was your idea ...

I really liked the story! But you should definitely change the title. Also, I think you should rewrite the first paraghaph. It is a litle bit confusing and repetitive. You ...

Hi! I liked your story very much. I just think you should take second look at the punctuation. For example: Jake’s eyes caught sight of something long and striped, heading ...

Good job! Well, I really think there should be a little more punctuation in your poem. Sometimes it is hard to understand what you are trying to say, or what ...

I simply loved it!! It's short, yet absolutely real. You make us feel sorry fot the character, emphatize with the mom... That's exactly what writting is supposed to do with ...

That's really good! The first "best thing" for me is when you talk about the difference of their ages. My boyfriend is almost ten years older than me and it ...

Wow! It is short but surely is worth it! It made me feel a little bit scared but made me empathise with the character. The fact that it is a ...