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AdoxagraphyAngelus

  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Empty Mind

    All of your acrostics are filled with extremely colorful words, and paint a picture in the readers mind. Whether it be a good picture or a bad picture, it gets ...

    May 13, 2011
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: The Perfect Girlfriend

    You wrote this really well. The content of the poem surprised me from my assumption about the title. It was angsty, and it showed vengeance. Wonderful job. :)

    May 13, 2011
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: I believed in fairies.

    Oh, this made me tear up. Just the other day my cousin and I were talking about how quickly our childhood is passing, and this just enforced the feeling. I ...

    May 13, 2011
  • Poetry » Narrative, General Re: A Call to Arms

    Oh, wow, that was beautiful and tragic... I really don't have anything bad to say about it. It was really sad and just really well written.

    May 12, 2011
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: To YWS (Happy Sixth Birthday)

    Even though I'm just reviewing this now... Go YWS. :D You wrote this awesomely.

    May 11, 2011
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: Nike - acrostic poem

    I love that this is how you sum up yourself, in such a fun, creative way. :) Makes me want to write one myself. xD Wonderful job.

    May 11, 2011
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: Sponge Bob

    Haha! This was humorous and adorable. :) I remembering writing these in, what, third grade. XD Looove it.

    May 11, 2011
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Aftermath (Another poem my friend who died and I coauthored)

    I'm deeply sorry about both your friends. As for the poem, there is nothing bad I can find to say about this poem. It was filled with such emotion that ...

    May 11, 2011
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Writing

    Describes the feeling of writing to a Tee! :D Wonderful job. :)

    May 11, 2011
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: You Call Me.

    I love how this shows how shallow society is today. Everyone's so negative and can't just be pleasant to one another. I loved this poem. Wonderful job.

    May 8, 2011
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: Thanks to You

    This was written really well. It sounded so full of happiness. Reading things that are happy, which I rarely ever do, makes me happy. Wonderful job. :)

    May 7, 2011
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: A thimble, a rose, and a ring.

    This was beautiful, elegant, and playful, some-how. The way it was written seems like it had an innocence of sorts to it. It was really lovely, and I can't find ...

    May 3, 2011
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Always

    That was gorgeous and beautiful. Amazing job.

    May 2, 2011
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: To Be Cool.

    I loved this. It showed what it's really like today; it seems like people can't like different things to be cool. They all have to be alike. They all have ...

    May 2, 2011
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: Night songstress

    This poem seemed very up-lifting, somehow. Very high-spirited, I guess. It's lacking comma's, and periods, but other than that, it's awesome.

    May 2, 2011


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— Plato