AdoxagraphyAngelus

Haha! This was really comedic and awesome. :) He knows almost everything about me. My name, my beliefs, where I go to school, Who's my crush, my mom and what ...

I ADORED this poem. I love the meaning it has behind it, I love everything you said in it, and it was wonderfully written. Awesome job. :) Just because I'm ...

That was beautifully written. You really have a way with words, and everything in this poem just seemed to flow together beautifully. Wonderful job. :) My eyes were glued to ...

That was really, really well written. Kudos to you for that. :) I can't think of one bad thing to say about it, and I'm not good at reviewing things ...

Hey, Ginger! Adox here to review again! :D "Hurry up! We're going to be late!" Hailey shouted from ahead. "Sorry Comma Hai-Hai Comma but I have to tie my roller ...

First off, I really enjoyed this piece. It was beautifully written. There are just a few things in the poem that I'd like to point out. The shadows have fully ...

Hey, Ginger. :) Adox here to review the first chapter of the story. I have just a few nit-picks to go over. First, I somewhat disagree with the first reviewer ...

Kay, so, I'm just gonna go over the few bad things about this. :) Survival is the struggle. Trust , is the will of life. A comma isn't necessary here. ...

I really enjoyed reading this. Your writing kept my eyes glued to the page the whole time. A character in a lot of short stories are Mary-Sues, even the rebels, ...

This was well written, it just lacked some punctuation. It held emotion, though, and kept me reading. :) I thought of you with love today Comma But that's nothing new ...

I really liked this, but there are a few things you could do to polish it up. :) They're waiting, watching theres There's, not theres nothing I can do I'm ...

I really loved, loved, loved the metaphors you used. The purple oval one, the one about trying to go faster and slower in the car, every single metaphor you used. ...

I loved this whole thing. :D There once was a young girl, smart and slick Her favorite things to use were her pen and her pick Period. She played her ...

I really liked this, and there are just a few things in here to correct. I lie awake in moonlight; swear I see your face. Hoping for the future, just ...

Swirling above my head. How do I want to feel? Which way should I turn? As the first stanza, nothing really popped out to me to continue reading. It didn't ...