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I looooooooooooooove this poem so much! It's making my heart warm up with joy! Now let me pause a moment to shout enthusiastically before I get to details. (HOORAY FOR AMAZING POETRY!) Okay, now....

God has you in his keeping
I have you in my heart.

I am positively in love with this phrase right here. Not only because I'm a devout Christian, but because it's a very vivid metaphor and image. There are so many things I can feel from just these two lines. Like, God may have you in his kingdom, but I have you here with me in my heart. Or, God may have taken you from me, but you'll always be with me. There's a thousand and one cuts of this cloth. I love it!

I like how it never directly mentions death except for in the title. It's good to be a little vague, to let the reader imagine what they want to in the story. But sometimes people get too vague and end up leaving holes. You do not have that problem here, it's a perfect balance! Keep up the good work.

All and all, I really adore this poem, and I'd love to see more if you have any. Just PM me or leave me a comment if you ever want another review, I'm happy to look at anything.
- SOCKS

This was well written, it just lacked some punctuation. It held emotion, though, and kept me reading.

I thought of you with love today Comma
But that's nothing new Comma
I thought of you yesterday Comma
And the days before that Comma too Period.

I think of you in silence Comma
I often speak your name Comma
All I have are memories Comma
And your picture in a framePeriod.

Your memory is my keepsake
In which I will never part Comma.
God has you in his keeping Comma
I have you in my heart.

Awesome job.