AdoxagraphyAngelus

Hey. :) Kinzee here to review. :) Okay, my favorite thing about this poem had to be how you started off each stanza. It seemed like a very clever way ...

d Don%u2019t listen too closely for she%u2019s singing her Suicide song again Comma with a pocket full of posies knotted through her belt loop and ashes [ashes] powdered in her ...

I really enjoyed your poem. :) It was written well, but, as always, there are a few things that I'd like to point out. There are two stanzas that don't ...

I really liked this poem. :) You used good metaphors, very creatively, and it was written well. I couldn't really find any grammatical or punctuation errors, so kudos to you ...

The Entrance aroma- it's never been right - Consider changing this to a comma. never smelled of home. I'm walking on eggshells avoiding the fight. Perhaps change this to avoiding ...

That was really, really sweet and cute. :) I don’t recall, but mother says that once I was small And my pillow would be the hem of her dress; I ...

I really enjoyed reading this. :) It was beautifully written, but there are still just a few small nitpicks in there. :) Press pause on the remote, the one in ...

Thunder claps, the sky grows dark. Bring on the rain. Lightning where is the spark? Like the other reviewers said, this line doesn't quite make sense. He has been put ...

Creepy. XD I'll just go over the poem, stanza by stanza. Welcome, unknowing tourists! We have all sorts of beautiful trees here, Come closer, have a look, Yes, see the ...

This was an interesting piece. :) It could be lengthened, but I'll just look over what you have here. :) There is a time, when in your mind . Where ...

I really enjoyed this. It had great metaphors, and it showed what some people feel when they just know that God's there with them. I love that feeling. :) I ...

One of the only bad things I noticed about this was how inconsistent your stanzas were. But that's not necessarily a bad thing. It is something someone will notice, and ...

I really adored this. I showed awesome emotion, and it made me feel bad for the guy you were writing about. Awesome job. :) The only thing I'd suggest is ...

I really liked this. It was good, in a different kind of way. :) A turn off for me was the no punctuation, but I get that was what you ...

I'm so, so sorry about your friend. I really enjoyed this poem. You and your friend are wonderful writers. It has some awesome depth, and it was written very well. ...